Rp Continued by Magma Was An Artist

This RP is between me and XxAmes-SonikkuxX. Before you say anything, Transmundane means "to exist beyond the physical world" Back when Espio was a main Character here he taught Kritz and Creeds Psychic powers. Because Creeds needs Kritz to be alive for his survival, he lends his power, thus creating transmundane Kritz. Kritz's strongest forme yet.

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18 Apr, 2013, 12:34 am
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Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 12:56 am

Kritz:Dainy! *He runs over to her and Cradles her, trying to stop the blood flow*
YOU HEARTLESS MONSTER! *He presses his head against her and a purple glow around dainy reverses her blood, making the blood return to he body*
Hold still Dainy, I must finish this.
*He gets up and runs towards ZERAX, turning one of his hands into a scythe using his powers. He swats at Zerax wildly.*
Creeds: Continue, brother. Your time isn't now. *Kritz looks back to see Creeds next to Dainy*
Kritz: Creeds! Take her somewhere safe! I can't have her hurt more than she allready is.!
Creeds: Thats not what I'm here for.
Kritz: What? *Creeds body and powe joins Kritz making him Transmundane*

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 1:06 am

TransmundaneKritz: (lets just call him Kritzercreed) *His eyes flash white and Zerax freezes in place* How can you fight if you are frozen? *He slashes at ZERAX putting a massive gash across his chest. The psychic bounds break and he lunges at Zerax doinna scissor motion at him*

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 1:10 am

(One of my good bros Saber is having a party, I have the pic like so you wanna come along?)

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 1:39 am

Kritz: *Kritz leaves his body and he returns to normal. Because his kritz was in his body he didn't realise what he was doing* Ughh.. Wait, *sees Zerax on the floor nearly dead* What? No.... nooo.... What have I done? *Sees Dainy's father. He fumbles around for a bit and he falls to his knees* I diserve whatever punishment you have sir. But know this, I was protecting your daughter and trying to give her hapiness.. *He looks down*

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 1:39 am

(Ment creeds not kritz leaving body. *facepalm*)

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 2:14 am

*as the knights drag Kritz away Shikaro appears in the middle of them*
Shikaro: Sir, these young children do not diserve to suffer these fates. They have destinies far more important that yours. On behalf of my galaxy I need you to leave, and never return. Or suffer the fate that trillions of my people had to.

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 2:35 am

Shikaro: If you do not follow along then you must suffer the consequences. *Shikaro teleports Kritz and Dainy away* You have been cursed. You can no longer talk to whom you love. Touch whom you love. Or hurt them. This was your fault.

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 3:14 am

Shikaro:That is the result of your actions. But you can reverse it. Forgive, and you will be forgiven.

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 3:38 am

Shikaro: So be it. But I was not lying. Your daughter would of been more than happy to forgive you.

Magma Was An Artist

18 Apr, 2013, 6:23 am

Shikaro: Forgive yourself. Forget bad deeds you have done and proclaim youself as a better person. Then I will bring back your son and your daughter. But I cannot break their love for each other.

Magma Was An Artist

19 Apr, 2013, 1:17 am

Kritz: *Goes Transmundane* He teleports infront of Michael and freezes him* You monster. *He frees Dainy from his grip and casts the frozen michael into a desert* He'll unfreeze but we wont last long in the desert. He diserves it.

Magma Was An Artist

19 Apr, 2013, 2:49 am

Kritz: *Turns normal* You're welcome *hugs*

Magma Was An Artist

19 Apr, 2013, 10:20 am

Kritz: Whoooo???

Magma Was An Artist

19 Apr, 2013, 11:33 pm

Kritz: Your father has caused us enough damage, I refuse to help him. I put him there anyway. He has done enough not to deserve my trust. I would be a fool if I helped him.

Magma Was An Artist

20 Apr, 2013, 12:23 am

Kritz: Dainy! *He reaches out to he but misses. He turns to Iris* I have all the right in the world to destroy you if you don't TELL ME WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE *He grabs Iris by he collar, staring straight into her eyes*

Magma Was An Artist

21 Apr, 2013, 1:08 am

Kritz: *Lets go* Okay, but if she doesn't wanna do it. Then don't force her! So stop pestering her.

Magma Was An Artist

21 Apr, 2013, 5:38 am

Kritz: *closes eyes and presses his fingers to his temples then he and Iris teleport to Dainy* Dainy, honey are you okay? *He walks up to her*

Magma Was An Artist

21 Apr, 2013, 11:45 am

Kritz: Dainy! Dainy calm down!!! *He teleports Iris away and then Grabs Dainy wrapping his arms around her* Dainy.. Please tell me what is going on...

Magma Was An Artist

21 Apr, 2013, 11:52 pm

Kritz: *He gets up and runs to her, embracing her and holding her head in his chest* Shhh... Shhh.... Atleast you have parents. *He strokes her back gently whispering soft words to her*

Magma Was An Artist

22 Apr, 2013, 7:33 am

Kritz: nonono.. *He teleports them both to a hospital demading for her to be taken in, and they do*

Magma Was An Artist

23 Apr, 2013, 12:47 am

Kritz: WHAT!?! *He gets up and runs to her room, pushing away any doctor's in the process* Isn't there a way to get her heart beating again? Like those electric shock pad things!? *He looks around the room frantically trying to hold back tears in his eyes*

Magma Was An Artist

23 Apr, 2013, 3:08 am

Kritz: Dainy..? No god please no! I'M NOT LEAVING. I CAN'T JUST LET HER DIE LIKE THIS. *He frees himself from the doctors and runs over to Dainy* Don't die, please don't. I don't want to be alone again... *He leans over and hugs her, crying as a warm pink glow surounds them both* Please...
Doctor: You have to leave now sir. *The doctors drag him out as he screams to be let back in*

Magma Was An Artist

23 Apr, 2013, 1:44 pm

Kritz: DAINY!! *He teleports next to Dainy and drops down to the floor, picking her up and clutching her close to him* I though you were gone... Please don't scare me like that again *He completely smuthers her*

Magma Was An Artist

23 Apr, 2013, 2:30 pm

*Kritz Cuddles her and gives a 'how could you' look at Iris*

Magma Was An Artist

23 Apr, 2013, 3:10 pm

Kritz: *Slaps the doctor's hand away* Have you no humilty!?! Don't worry Dainy, I'm here for you.

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 1:57 am

Kritz: Also you are a stranger. Dainy has been through enough. I'm not handing her over that easy. Plus, I have telepathic powers. I can look into you and know everything you know. So back off and be gentle. *He wraps his arm around Dainy's head protecting her*

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 2:52 am

Kritz:Uggghhh *Coughs blood* Dainyy.. *He teleports Dainy away* Who the hell are you? Why does everyone want Dainy!?? *He gets up and grabs ??? by the throat*

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 2:52 am

*hunter, whoops :

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 10:06 am

Kritz: *gives a holy shat wtf face to Dainy* Don't touch me! *He pushes her away.* I need to save Dainy. And you are just being a d!ck and F***ing everything up! *His eye twitches and he leans over, a low hollow laughter reverbrates from him* You've done it.

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 10:06 am

I MENT IRIS NOT DAINY -.-

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 2:31 pm

Kritz: *His Body shakes as he laughs* Oh silly Iris. Could you not see this would happen? *His spines grow larger and darker in color and tear out of his jacket, his Horn splits into three and his body becomes al ot like Creeds's* Now you know who I really was, before the seperation. *His eyes flash red and red wings shoot from his back* The Hunter, is now the Prey...

Magma Was An Artist

24 Apr, 2013, 11:59 pm

*As soon as Dainy sets on fire, Krids (Original Kritz) bursts through a wall, breathing heavily like a madman.*

Krids: You see that you've forced us to this point. You are stupid for doing so. *He gives Dainy a, 'do you want to go first?' look*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 1:13 am

*Krids sees Dainy slam into a tree*
Krids:AARRRRRGGH
*He leaps at hunter in blinding speed*
Krids:IM GOING TO K!LL YOU. TEAR YOU APART. SEPERATE EACH LIMB LIKE A CHICKEN WING. THEN DISEMBOWL YOU LIKE A TUB OR PLAY-DOUGH.
*He lands on hunter's face his arms slashing at bliding speeds as he bites furiously*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 1:58 am

*Krids gets up and steps away from Hunter*
Krid: Gahh.... uhhh..
*He collapses and turns back into Kritz*

Kritz: What, happened?

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 3:42 am

Kritz: Wait Dainy? Iris..? No...
*He collapses again*
What have I done..? I'm a monster...
*He crawls over to the dying hunter and heals him with the remaining power he has left*
Don't bother killing me, I won't suffer.
*He gets up and walks over to a large clif hanging over the Ocean.
This is it.

*He jumps off the cliff, focusing on the water. As he falls he closes his eyes, knowing that whatever happens he'll have nothing to go back to.
*He hits the water, and it carrys him out with the sea*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 4:10 am

*A barely consious Kritz sees Dainy*
Kritz: No.. what are you doing..? Don't save me, I might get angry again. I don't want to hurt you.. *Kritz pushes Dainy away* Go with Hunter and Iris, they know whats best, I'm just going to ruin it again... *Kritz ducks under the waves, trying to swim away from them, but he is physical dead, everything in his body is sore. So he just lays there sinking slowly*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 11:06 am

*A barely conscious Kritz appears* Dainy... Please I don't want to hurt you... I've already done enough... Just go back, to where you are safe... Please...

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 2:16 pm

Kritz: I know, but I don't want anything to happen to you... *He coughs up water* I don't want you living like this...

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 4:25 pm

*He gets up, groaning from the strain*
Kritz: I love you Dainy, there isn't a thing I wouldn't do for you.
*He takes off his Soaking Jacket and throws it aside*
Lets just get you cleaned up.
*He teleports them back to his house, a warm, cozy mountain cottage*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 5:06 pm

Kritz: Ever since the kritical gang had to split I've lived here. I much prefer quiet peacefullness over the loud rambunctious city. Theres two bathrooms, one downstairs and the one on this level. I'll be in the downstairs showers if you need me. Oh, and that big closet has my cousins old clothing in it, they'd probs fit you.
*He grabs a towel, kisses Dainy and heads down to the shower*
You're welcome to join me!
*He says in a silly joking manner*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 5:15 pm

Kritz: Hey! No Fair! *He runs behind her*
You better not trip down those stairs!
*He runs past her and jumps down the stairs, turning with his arms out, knowing thats she's bound to trip on the door stop*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 5:23 pm

Kritz: No... But I may have to tickle you to make sure!
*He starts tickling Dainy*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 5:33 pm

Kritz: Oh no I'm making her laugh!!!
*He eventually stops Tickling her*
Alright now, cleanup time. Shower or Bath? *He points to the Large, Spa like bath, and then the wide shower.*
I can make the bath bubbly for more privacy if you want.

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 5:49 pm

Kritz: Okay then.
*He walks back to the Stairs, closing the door behind him*
Where did I put it...?
*He Looks around and finds a bottle labled "Muscle Relaxant and Horn strenghthener"*
There we go.
*He runs up to his bathroom and steps into the Shower/bath, removes his remain clothing, Shirt Pants Etc, and Bathes.*
I should never let my guard down, beeing this far from Dainy behind walls allready is giving me nerves. But I must respect her privacy. Who knows what she'd do if I would burst in unannounced.
*He whistles as he rubs the lotion into his horn/s.*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 6:05 pm

*Kritz opens the door with a towel wrapped around his waist*
Kritz: Dainy get up, don't be so silly. You just ain't used to everything thats all.
*He takes her up to the main area and opens the clothing cuppboard* All this clothing you can use untill we get your normal outfit back from the drycleaner. I need to wait for my new Jacket but that doesn't matter.
*He shows her the three different Shampoos* One is for the scalp, another for hair/fur and the last ones is for smoothness. Combine them with the conditioners to get different results.
*He kisses her on the cheek*
You might wanna hurry back or you might catch a cold, the hair dryer is under the sink by the way.
*He heads back up to the bathroom*

Magma Was An Artist

25 Apr, 2013, 6:23 pm

*He turns around, smirking.*
Still not used to normal life.
*He chuckled to himself*
(Sorry But I have to sleep now :C see you in like 4-6 hours :3)

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 12:43 am

*Kritz, still half dressed replies:*
Why would you ask that? What makes you think I dont?

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 1:51 am

*Kritz puts his shirt on. and comes outside* Dainy, thats just your stupid father talking. He said that because he didn't want you wearing shorts, he manipulated you. He isn't around so you have the freedom to wear anything. I mean look at Xaivier back when he was alive and wasted.
*He brings up a picture of Xaivier wearing women's clothing passed out on a couch*

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 2:12 am

*He places the picture back on the mantle piece*
Kritz:Dainy, trust me, its not disrespectfull. Xaivier kept telling me that he wanted to go out like a rockstar. And he did. He told us that he doesn't want as reflecting on him in a sad way. He wants us to treat him just the same way we did before.
*He gives dainy a dress outfit with tights*
Here, try this.

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 11:44 am

*Kritz leans over to look at the door, seeing a shilouette.*
For gods sake please let it be anyone but Hunter or Iris.
*He walks to the door putting on his gloves and a cotton hoodie. He opens the door to see Kyle*
May I help you?

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 1:53 pm

*Kritz turns around, taking the banana toy from her*

Kritz: This man is just lost, all he needs is directions.
*He turns back to Kyle*

You can get up. No need to be so peasntly. Were is it that you need to go?

Magma Was An Artist

26 Apr, 2013, 11:17 pm

*Kritz Stares at him, then Kritz holds up his left hand, blatantly showing the Ring on his ring finger*
Dude.
*He stares at Kyle for a few more seconds then slams the door*
Dainy honey are you okay?

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 1:31 am

*He walks over to her then places one hand on her hip and wipes away her hair from her facd with the other*

Kritz: Dainy... It's okay. Do you want to go somewhere, and just have fun? I know a few good amusement parks...

*He takes a brochure from a table and it reads*

"Castle Entertainment! Have the most royal time of your life and get treated like Kings and Queens. Don't miss our Horse rides, Jousting, and all sorts of Mechanical rides!"

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 3:35 am

*Kritz Chuckles at Dainy as he walks over to the window and opens it*

Kritz: You don't realise that this really creepy and I might have ro call the police....

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 4:03 am

*Kritz jumps out from the window*

Well no. I rescued her. That life was hell for her. Ands its not like her father loves her anyway.
*He steps closer to Kyle, Towering over him*

I'm not selling her. AND IF YOU THINK THAT YOU CAN BUY HER THAN 8UGGER OFF!
*He pushes Kyle away, jumps back into the window and shuts it. He walks over to Dainy*

Are you okay, whats wrong!?!

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 4:14 am

*Kritz puts his arms on her shoulders, then he leans in and kisses her*

Kritz: D-Dainy.. I'm not going to sell you...

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 11:50 am

*He stands up*

Kritz: Take all the air you need!

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 1:08 pm

*Kritz was watching a sitcom on the Television*

Kritz: Dainy, did you get so- Oh my god.

*He runs over and picks her up, carrying her straight to the couch*

Oh my god what happened!?! Who did that!

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 2:04 pm

*He touches her forehead and its SEARING*

Kritz: Stay right there, I'll be right back with my medical stuff. You might be getting a fever..

*He rushes upstairs and brings back a blanket, pillows, and Medical liquids, equipment Etc. He carefully a pillow under he head, a cool pack on her forehead, and wraps her in the blanket.*

Kritz: I'm going to check you then give you the medicine you require. Working in the Kritical gang, I wasn't only the Leader I was the Medic too.

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 2:17 pm

*Kritz turns to Dainy*

Kritz: You are perfectly normal. Turns out you have hayfever. Nothing bad. Lots of people do!

*He gives her a chewable orange-flavored tablet*

Chew this, it'l help with your Hayfever.

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 2:29 pm

Kritz: N'aww, its yummy! I chose it for you.

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 2:55 pm

Kritz: See I told you! But nothing comes close to the real thing!
*He walks over to a window, leans out to a bush, and plucks a orange from it.*

I'll put some more in the fridge to get cool. Then we can eat em for Afternoon snacks!

Magma Was An Artist

27 Apr, 2013, 3:04 pm

*He drops the Orange and it rolls away*

Kritz: Dainy!
*He runs over to her*

What are you hearing?!? Dainy!??

*Meanwhile a unanouced figure puts the Orange back, making no sound whats so ever...*

Magma Was An Artist

15 May, 2013, 10:21 pm

Kritz: DAINY!!!

*He Catches her in his arms and runs to the phone and dials the ambulance*

AmbulanceLady(Lol): May I help you?

Kritz: My fiancee keeps hearing voices, and she just passed out!

Lady: Were are you?

Kritz: 1, eastern peak, Emerald hill zone.

Lady: We will be there in a few minutes.

Magma Was An Artist

16 May, 2013, 12:22 am

*Kritz turns to Dainy, a terrified look on his face*

Kritz: Dainy! Its okay, you're safe with me. The ambulance is going to be here soon!

*He gives soft ''shhh''s as he holds her, stroking her back softly*

???: You don't know what you are getting yourself into Krids.

Kritz: Woah what? Who are you?
???: Your father fool. After you and Creeds separated things were getting worse, and they are going to continue getting bad if you don't take back your original forme.

*Kritz Shakes his head and turns back to Dainy*

Magma Was An Artist

16 May, 2013, 12:57 am

*Kritz hears the ambulance and he runs outside with Dainy in his arms*

Lady: Put her on the bed and we'll go.

*Kritz hesatantly puts her on it*

Lady: You'll have to go in a seperate car.

Kritz: NO. She needs me! I need her! I'm coming along!
*The lady nods as Kritz helps the doctors get Dainy into the van*

Magma Was An Artist

16 May, 2013, 3:21 am

*Kritz was in the van, sitting in a chair sleeping*
Kritz: Uh.. what??
*Sudden realization*

Dainy! Calm down, you aren't going to hell! You're in a ambulance, we're taking you to a hospital!
*He holds her hands down trying to calm her down*

Magma Was An Artist

16 May, 2013, 5:23 am

Kritz: DAINY!!!!

*He jumps out after her, wrapping her and curling up. They Both hit the road, Kritz being brused, cut and rolled around. He continues to clutch Dainy*

Kritz: Ughh.....

*Meanwhile a truck comes up from behind but doesn't notice them*

DAINY LOOK OUT!

*Kritz pushes Dainy away and gets hit by the truck*

Magma Was An Artist

16 May, 2013, 12:34 pm

*As Dainy Cries a orange light appears next to them both. The light lifts up into the air and a faint outline of a chameleon can be seen*

???: You are not ready yet, dear Dainy. This time, you must live.

*The light becomes brighter and brighter untill Dainy cannot see anything. The light fades and she wakes up in a hospital bed next to a heavily Casted and hooked up person. The faint glimmer of two pink horns poke through the casts, however*

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