'That's great but a little more.' Dapplerain said, she was training Stormpaw to hunt. Today was the day when every cat had to train, Warriors and Apprenetce. Apprenetice against Apprenetice, Warrior against Warrior. Hawkstar had this day every once a year in new leaf. 'You must love your Clan working hard and having fun.' Raventail, Hawktunnel's mate, said whille rubbing against him. 'Yes I do. Where's are kits?' 'In the Elders' den with the other kits remember?' 'Oh yes.'

can i join i will be a warrior in training or a kit but my name is eigther swiftpaw of swiftkit (when i become a warrior my name will be swiftwhiskers)

Hawkstar looked at the sky. 'It's getting dark.' Raventail nodded and went to get the kits and put them into the nusery. 'MEROW! It's getting dark! Into the Camp!' All cats stoped trainning and went to the camp, in the mist of cats, a cat stoped. 'Hawkstar?' 'Yes Stormpaw?' 'When is the border partoal?' 'Ask Raventail, she's the Deputy.' 'And Hawkstar?' Hawkstar stoped in his tracks. 'Yes?' 'When will I be a Warrior?' 'I'll get with Dapplerain in the morning.' Then Hawkstar and Stormpaw went into the camp.

'Hey Stormpaw!' Swiftpaw padded over to Stormpaw. 'Yes, Swiftpaw? Can't you see that I'm eatting?' Strompaw said, getting annoyed. 'Anyways I'm gonna be a Warrior Tommorow! How about you?' 'Swiftpaw stop braging!' 'Yes, Fireheart.' 'Hawkstar is gonna talk with my mentor in the morning.' Swiftpaw nodded his head and started to eat.

when will ratpelt come?

'Need help moving the kits Raventail? You've been working too hard.' Raventaio nodded okay to help. 'But all this work is for the Clan.' 'But if you work too hard, you won't be here.'

(Raventail .^. Sorry if this messes you up but I wanted Dawnsky to be Medicine Cat not Fawnfur. Fawnfur is my strongest cat (fighting wise.) .-. Is this ok?)

idk i think teres no ratpelt maybe stoneclaw who i came up wth!

Raventail finished up moving the kits, she went to Hawkstar's den. 'Oh someone's already in there. I'll come back later.' 'No you can come in.' Raventail walked in. 'Oh hello Dapplerain.' 'Hello, just trying to get Stormpaw to be a Warrior, ah!' 'RAVENTAIL!' 'I gotta go.' Raventail rushed outside. 'SunClan Warriors?!' Hawkstar rushed out, 'Dawnsky!' 'Right away Hawkstar.' Dawnsky checked both Cats. Then Dawnsky had some Warriors take them to her Den.

Fawnfur padded towards the apprentices, clearly irratated.
"Arrrghhh!" She hissed. "Can any cat get any sleep!"

'Fawnfur you're not that old if you are go to the Elders' den!' Raventail yelled at her. Hawkstar went to the Healer's den then Raventail came in. 'How are they?' Raventail asked

Fawnfur growled, then shook her fur lightly. "Hawkstar, may I go hunting?"

Dawnsky shook her pale ginger fur. "Good, Hawkstar." She replied.

'You can go hunting but bring Stormpaw.' Raventail padded over to the sleeping SunClan Warriors. 'uh...' The White Cat moaned 'Eekk!' Raventail jumped.

Fawnfur darted out of camp, then skidded to a halt. "STORMPAW!" She yowled.

Raventail looked at the White Warrior, she didn't care what was going on around her. 'uh...' The White Warrior moaned again, 'Where- Where am I?' He asked. 'You're in NightClan's Medince Cat's Den.' Raventail replied. Then the Black Tabby Warrior awoke. 'Jetpaw? Are you okay?' The White Warrior asked. 'I'm- I'm okay Mentor. Thank you Whiteblizzard. How about you?' 'Hurt, just like you.' Jetpaw looked at Dawnsky. 'Hello there.' Dawnsky said. Jetpaw nodded his head. 'What brings you here?' Raventail asked. 'We're rejected by our Clan while saving our Clan.' Jetpaw agreed with Whiteblizzard. Raventail frowned at the news and the rouges. She strode out of the Den into the Clearing. 'That was Raventail, our Deputy. Earlier Hawkstar, our leader, was in here. Raventail doesn't take Rouges easily, if you are to stay be really respectful to her and espesily Hawkstar.' The cats looked confused. 'Hawkstar is Raventail's mate and if you hurt him, you'll know that you got on her bad side, she'll rip you apart.' 'That's right.' A tom's voice slipped into the den. 'Hello Stoneclaw.' Stoneclaw nodded his head and turned his young sleek body to a side. 'See this, this is the mark of her. I made her and Hawkstar mad when I was just a paw. Then I dared myself to lay a paw on Hawkstar. Good thing every Warrior tried to stop her. Alot if cats got hurt.' 'Who stopped her?' Jetpaw asked. Stoneclaw looked at the young cat. 'Hawkstar himself, he put his body in front of her and she stopped.'

then hawkstar and ratpelt appeared 'rogues'ratpelt said then ratpelt saw one 'whiteblizzard its me ratpaw'ratpelt said 'its u why didnt u meet me for hunting lessons?'whiteblizzard said 'were friends'

Raventail shot her ears up. And ran over. 'Friends!? You 2 are friends!?' 'Calm down Raventail.' Hawkstar said. Raventail looked at Stoneclaw, he quickly dipped his head. Raventail sat down. Jetpaw looked at Raventail as she looked at Ratpelt, Whiteblizzard, Hawkstar, and Dawnsky. 'She's beautiful, I can see why Hawkstar loves her.' Jetpaw thought. Raventail looked at Jetpaw. 'What are YOU looking at Paw?' Jetpaw dipped his head, 'I'm so sorry Raventail.' Whiteblizzard, Dawnsky, Hawkstar, Raventail, and Stoneclaw looked at him. 'Ratpelt please go.' Hawkstar said, she rushed away.

'Can I ask something.' Jetpaw asked as Raventail went away to give partols. 'Sure what is it?' Dawnsky asked. 'What's- What's a Paw?' 'Apprenetice, it's easier for to say it.' Hawkstar answered.

Raventail looked down, she frowned. 'I don't think so, but we'll try.' She rubbed her body against his. 'Don't worry, you're my family no matter what.'

hawkstar nodded then he saw a shadow clan cat taking there prey

'Hey!' Raventail said. The ShadowClan Warrior looked and ran, Raventail ran after the tom.

'Where has he gone?' 'Out of territory with OUR prey.'

'dear that was not shadow clan that was star clan getting the soul of our prey'hawkstar said raventail looked closely she saw a ghost looking tail'it is star clan

Raventail came running out and into Hawkstar's flank. 'Did we?' 'Yes, one' Hawkstar touched noses with her.

hawkstar then talked to raventails belly'hello little 1 its your daddy!'he said raventail laughed then went to the queens den 'i wonder wat a kick feels like'she said

'It's just like a regular kick, but inside of you and lighter.' One queen replied. 'Thanks for the tip, first time mom. Hey did you see what Hawkstar said?' 'Yeah. He's like Hello first kit it's your Daddy!' All the queens laughed and Raventail. 'Yep that's my Hawkstar.'

'your so lucky hes sooo handsome'one queen said then raventail found her bedding then hawkstar came in 'raventail we have a promblem your brother died because a shadow clan cat kil!ed him!'hawkstar said raventail was shocked

'Turtlenose died?!' Raventail jumped to her paws. 'No. You need rest.' Hawkstar looked at Raventail's belly. 'We can't loose this one.' Hawkstar said gentally.

hawkstar kept near her 'lets go to the cave under star rocks'hawkstar said

Ravenstar nodded and followed him, she always followed close, when they crossed a River, he'll take her scruff and walk to the other side.

'lets stay here today'hawkstar said then he nuzzled her belly 'youll be safe little one'he said then raventail slept then *kick*'the first kick'raventail said sleeping hawkstar put his ear up to her belly he heard there kit swimming in her belly

'Hello, is anyone home?' Hawkstar said, another kick came. 'Do you understand me?' No kick. 'It was only a small kick the little one needs time to grow.' She licked Hawkstar's ear and layed back down.

Chapter 2 is up!