WITB part 17 by Bramblestar
(Truepaw POV) "Hey umm, Daggerfang." "Hmmm." Daggerfang turned his attention towards Truepaw. Truepaw swallowed. "Umm, where are we going exactly? Brambleheart never told me." "We're going to the Auroraclan border to set our markings." Daggerfang replied. "Oh, ok. Thanks Daggerfang. So tell me how did Brambleheart become deputy?" "Well-"Daggerfang began. "I can tell you that story." A pale gray she-cat walked up. "Hello Wildshadow." Daggerfang greeted. Wildshadow nodded to Daggerfang. It all
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05 Apr, 2013, 1:31 am
started when Deathclan attacked us. I was fighting a ginger, she-cat. She looked like a fox. As I mistook her. I scratched her flank and bit her tail. She hissed at me and pummled me too the ground. That was when I saw our former deputy Skystripe lunging at Shadestar. But before I could see anymore the she cat hit me in the face with her massive paws. Then Brightstar yowled. She asked why they were always attacking us. He said that our terrirtory was so rich in prey that he wanted it. Brightstar ordered them to leave. They did but Shadestar said that they would be back. When I looked in Skystripe's direction horror overtook me. Skystripe layed there in a pool of blood and had a deep cut in his throat." "Hey back of the patrol, keep up." Brambleheart ordered. "Then Brightstar chose my sister to be deputy. Wildshadow paused then sniffed the air. An adder jumped and bit Wildshadow's shoulder. She fell to the ground. Truepaw looked in horror. "Brambleheart!!" Truepaw called. Brambleheart turned around and she narrowed her eyes. "Wildshadow!"
06 Apr, 2013, 9:11 am
this is amazing!! i love the eyes ^-^
07 Apr, 2013, 12:38 am
So good! NO WILDSHADOOWWW!!! D: