Well... This is it. The end of my first story on colors... THANK YOU MY READERS!!! You guys/girls are so awesome!!! Please leave constructive critism, and things you would've changed, and things you liked about the story.
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27 Mar, 2013, 9:29 pm
Six months later: Everything is as it should be. The kingdom of Draknos has been rebuilt, and restored to its former glory. Everyone is leading their lives as they used to be. But, the epilogue is going to focus on two specific creatures. A green hedgehog and a red jingoua. They are wearing hooded sweatshirts to hide their faces as they sprint through the city streets. They finally reach their destination. The hedgehog grins and pulls out a can of green spray paint. She pulls part of her hood over her face and begins to spray her name. After she is done, the jingoua takes his turn, decorating the wall. The bright sunlight doesn't hide them at all. They are soon found by the castle guards. The hedgehog girl giggles then snaps open green feathered wings... that weren't there before. The jingoua laughs too, then takes off on his wings. A gift. They soar into the sky as the guards curse behind them. The pair looks over the city. Inferno, Cinos, Flameno and Maria spot them, and wave. Ronni is standing on a castle turret. She smiles and rolls her eyes at the delinquents. Leails is out hunting. She spots the pair and waves. Shock and Mora are out walking in a park. They smile and Shock yells: "Try not to get caught! 'Cause we aren't bailing you out!" The jingoua laughs at this and the hedgehog rolls her eyes. They continue flying. To where, neither one knows. Outside the kingdoms walls, they share their first kiss. They stare at each other and then continue flying. They know only that wherever they go, adventure will follow. If this was a fairy tale, the sun would be setting, and they would fly off into it, knowing the secrets of life. But this isn't a fairy tale, the sun is high in the sky, and these teens know nothing of life. But it makes sense. After all, they are outsiders.
27 Mar, 2013, 9:40 pm
Awesome!! I'm gona draw that!! :D
27 Mar, 2013, 11:13 pm
Great ending!!! Loved it!
28 Mar, 2013, 12:59 am
that was awesome FC 2535
28 Mar, 2013, 1:00 am
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29 Mar, 2013, 6:43 pm
WOOOOOOOOW!! You should make a book about this! One of the best stories I've ever read!! : D