[Chapter 1 This Life Part 3] When i awakened, i found myself in Leafriver's underground den. "Darkpaw! Are you alright?" Sandpaw whispered to me. Leafriver was in the distance. She walked towards us. "Are you ok Darkpaw?" She asked me. I slowly nodded. I saw bowls of leaves, webs, and sticks. I slowly got up and walked towards the exit. "Thank you Leafriver" I said, and walked out with Sandpaw behind me. I turned to Sandpaw, "Thanks Sandpaw. I didnt know that would happen."
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18 Mar, 2013, 5:12 am
epic 8D
18 Mar, 2013, 5:25 am
[Continued] "It's ok." Sandpaw said. "Maybe you were tired.." "Maybe" "I'll let you sleep at my den." "Thanks Sandpaw." We walked over to his den and he shared some of his food. Afterwards i slept in a corner that was very warm. Sandpaw covered me in deer hides and hare fur to keep me warm. The walls reminded me of sand.. I thought about the elements... Fire. Ice. Storm. And many more.. My elements are Storm, Air, and Dark. Sandpaw's is only Sand. I was too tired to open my eyes.. I soon fell asleep..
18 Mar, 2013, 9:08 pm
I cant wait for more! ceep wrighting!
20 Mar, 2013, 2:52 am
wow i love your storys n,n its almost like a poum the way u do it beleave it or not it helps relax me so i can sleep so please continue n.n sorry if i miss spelled that 00
20 Mar, 2013, 2:53 am
oh btw im gonna tell my friend about this so i need a link for her do u think u could comment on my gallery so she & her friends can like ur story ?
20 Mar, 2013, 5:30 am
^Sure. Though i dont want any likes i just like seeing people saying something in the comments. But i'll give your friend a link to my gallery.