I went through and watched your animations and like this one best. Here's why: It's the best organized and has the least errors. Remember when doing animations that, if you mess up, never erase the mistake because it shows you erasing. Instead, always use the undo button instead. Another thing I like about this one is it's funnier. That, and the background design makes the words look better. Another tip would be to try experimenting with the types of animations I have in my "How To Make An Animation" tutorial. I literally spent weeks making a few moments of animation and had to start over several times. I hope some of tgat is helpful!