(Burg) Your turely are like your Grandfother Gale cloud. (Max) How do you know his name? (Burg) We both traned under the same Master but befour we start your traning take this. *He gives Max a traning vest and arm band* (Burg) Alright your all set are you ready to git started? (Max) Yes bring it on. *And so the the traning began the water style felt natural to max and he soon compleated his traning* (Burg) Good very good now try the combo. (Max) Right haa chaa. (Burg) Thats it you got it now git some rest the big day is almost here. (Max) Yes master. *The day of the elementil test was here and no pony was more ready then Max Cloud wen it was his turn he saw three ponys walking up to the stage* (Burg) Ha glad you could make it. *The three ponys wher Clif, Subuky, and Cole, the leaders of the earth, air, and fire tribes* (Max) You all came. (Clif) Yep. (Subuky) We wood not have missed this for the world. (Cole) So how about you git up here and show us all what you can do. (Max) Lets go. *The show began and max gave them a show no pony shall forget* (Cilf) Is that. (Subuky) I think it is. (Cole) Its a combo of all four styles. (Burg) well dun max well dun. *After the selibration and every pony had head home Master burg found max packing* (Burg) I see your going home to. (Max) Yes i realy should git back to my frineds and family. (Burg) Have a safe trip home max. (Max) I will and thanks for everything. (Burg) Your welcome good by max. (Max) Good by. *And so with his quest compleat Max returned home. THE END.

Thats was a pretty fun story but I think you should draw Max :)