ok ignore the internet commets.

pocket woke with a start acording to star clan only her, ice and kena could save a entire clan from a bloodthirty enamy she was also warned of the twolegs that lived near bye pocket instly thought "i must ask kena and ice what to do!" ok artic your turn.

its ok continuin: pocket sat down as complotly as possibe and breathed in,"ok at the start i had a dream that 3 will save a clan of great need. i paneked when i saw me you and ice leading a clan with a she-cat running with us." i had the same dream" ice meawed "me too" kena meawed uncomertly "wait one minit you had this dream kena and you didnt tell me!!!" sha,za gasped "im sorry mum i just didnt want you to be worred." kena sighed "its ok but we better hurry up im not sure if we'll make it just sitting down!" sha.za meawed tryumphly "we'll?" pocket meawed once agen confused "wha?! you think im not commin well keep on dreaming im comming wether you like it or not!" ok who's next?

fogot this part!
pocket looked at sha,za "but wait one min we dont know ware we'll eaven be going!" " its ok pocket i had another dream... we will be gided bye starclan but we must meet at the mountains bye midnight as a cat will meet us thair to tell us what satr clan wants us to do" ice mumbled inshore she should be telling everyone "ice why didnt you tell us we must tell are parents now why we're going to the mountains and are good byes. its going to be a long jorney..." pocket meawed "ok then ice you'll need to go to cricket and kena, i would tell your dad." continu

poket was talking to blackcurrent and golden intill she said her good byes and left to sleep near the river as she sleeped she had another dream of whitch kena was alone stuck in a hole of witch she built her self and was sleeping. "KENA" pocket shouted in her sleep but no one herd her. "pocket... POCKET!!!" it was kena "um pocket i have somthin to.. to tell you..." continu plz XD

oh and arctic will kena come if not who will take her place (to the lake where tiger heart lives)

um i dunno but i'll continu anyway X3:
pocket sat thair looking at were kena had left for 3 hours stunned "but... but star clan said." she mumbeled as she walked of towareds ice's den. "um ice..." "yea pocket" ice replied confused "well can we start are trip to the mountains soon?" pocket meowed unhappaly " but what about kena..... oh i almost fogot she aint comming is she" ice meowed, pocket shouk her head and repeted "so can we go to the mountains tomorrow just after sunset bye then we will be able to get to the mountains by midnight to se what star clan will say." "ok then i'll tell my mum and dad know" ice meowed ovusly regretting that she was chosen by star clan to help this clan in troble. "great i'll meet you bye the river tomorrow" pocket meowed trying to sound happy but she was also missing her parents and wishing she diddnt have to leave them.

kena woke with a start she had a dream of her friends leaving her and crossing towards the mountaind for a minet she thought that she should of gone with them but as she looked across to her parents sharing a meal of rabbit she knew she made the right couise.
mean while over near the river pocket was pacing up and down waiting for ice "oh come on COME ON!!!" pocket mutterd to her self "ok ok im hear now are you going to waist all your energy pacing like that?" ice lafed (im terrible at spelling) "speeking of energy" cricket meowed with backcurrent padding with her "your going to need theise" blackcurrent meowed as she droped two bundles of herbs "i mean im no medicen cat but i know my herb and your going to be gone for a very long time so i would eat theise if i were you!" cricket meowed "thank you mum" ice smiled "and thank you mum i dont know what i would do with out you!" pocket meowed almost in tears "dont worry we'll be fine" blackcurrent and cricket said in turn as ice and pocket set of towards the mountains!.
back in sha,za's den moonlight was playing a gessing game with kena, "um... you had an argument?" moonlight asked "no" kena repied "urr you told them you hated them and never wanted to see them agen?" "no thats arguing" "um..." "moonlight thats enuf im sure kena dusnt have to tell you every thing" sha,za butted in "but hunny you said i was her father and fathers should know what thair children get up to!?" moonlight wailed "ok... i'll tell you." ok continu plz X3

*herbs

who's turn is it any way as in is minty joining?