Story continued. *As Max Cloud flys over the clouds he seas a holl in the clouds and goes down to cheak it out* (Max) Who i never thought i would see a hot spring all the way out here. *And just a mile from the hot spring was the fire tribe*(Max) Im here at last. *He arrives just as the local fire festival is giting started where all the young elementilists show what they learned the past year* (Max) This is amazing. *After giting somthing to eat he finds his way the fire tribe leaders home*
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10 Mar, 2013, 8:30 pm
(Princess Cole) Welcome to the fire tirbe i am princess cole i got a letter from a friend telling me that you where coming. (Max) So you know why im here? (Cole) Yes and i trust you wont to git started? (Max) Yes pleas. (Cole) Ok then lets git started. *The traning was heard one roung move with this element and you could end up BBQ but max kept going and compleated his traning* (Cole) Ok thats enough for touday max are you alright? (Max) No my legs feal like ruber i can bearly stand up. (Cole) Hear have some water. (Max) Thanks. (Cole) Don't push your self to heard alright now git some rest you will need it for tomrrow. (Max) Ok. *The day of the elementil test had come but just like with the earth and air tribes nothing happend* (Max) DAM IT i work as heard as ever and still nothing. (Cole) Max com down you tryed your best and i can see the fire in your eyes the will to keep going no mater what. (Max) You can? (Cole) Yes so chear up you know the water tirbes leader may be able to help you find your element. Fallow the river down stream to the water tirbe. (Max) Thank you for everythig. (Cole) No problem have a safe trip. (Max) I will good by. *And so max sets out for the water tribe*/Part 4 coming soon/
13 Mar, 2013, 8:37 pm
Awsome so far, are you going to draw Max with the water tribe?? That would be amazing!