Primarily Defective (Prologue) 2 by Whoever
Page 2 of 4 of the prologue. More dialogue. Yeah, it has a rather slow start because of plot and characters and stuff. I promise more funnies in future pages. :P
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10 Mar, 2013, 12:17 am
James is my favorite so far :D Great job, Whoever!
10 Mar, 2013, 1:46 am
By the way, in case you want to know, the full names of James´ step-silblings are Jason Biff, Alexandra Beetys, Billy M. Cino and Lynn Popsicle (They didn´t know her last name) :)
10 Mar, 2013, 4:08 am
Are kimberly and mandy going to appear in this?
Sweet.
10 Mar, 2013, 4:44 am
KK111: (Spoilers) These are only four pages of intro. It´s supposed to introduce the main character but not the main cast. Sorry if it´s taking too long but I´m trying to cram jokes and interesting characters in this too. If I´m doing my job well, it will blend pretty well into the main story at the end :P
10 Mar, 2013, 7:58 am
^ Don't worry about the slow start. I like when a story builds depth.
10 Mar, 2013, 3:35 pm
Love how Lynn just yells out everything her dolls are doing. XD
10 Mar, 2013, 4:44 pm
Btw, I´m a bit suprised that only Catchphrase in the website-comments was suprised that Alex is a girl. People weren´t supposed to know from just reading the first page XP
13 Mar, 2013, 3:00 am
:3
29 Mar, 2013, 5:39 am
is that kid a robot?