Twist of Fate by TranceComics

Another story since I didn't really like QoTC. Part of this was a school as.signment and I just ended up continuing by myself. There is some vi.olence and swearing so you were warned XD I don't really like this cover though and may change it. Story in comments.

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
08 Mar, 2013, 12:29 am
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TranceComics

08 Mar, 2013, 12:47 am

(Labeled wrong, actually Prologue)
''Lets teach this twerp a lesson shall we?'' My friend's voice rang threatningly down the alleyway. There was a girl at least three or four years younger than us staring with wide and scared eyes in my direction; it almost looked like she was pleading for help. Arann stomped up and kicked her to the ground with as much force as he could, making her scream in pain. ''Shut up brat.'' he growled, kicking her again. This time she was thrown against a wall, she was choking up blood and her arm was bent at a strange angle I was sure wasn't good.

TranceComics

08 Mar, 2013, 1:05 am

''Arann don't you think that's far more than enough?'' my other friend Aleiha spoke up.
''Nonsense! This twerp needs to learn a lesson about stealing from us,'' Arann spat.
''But it was just some food,'' she tried to reason.
''I'll hear no more of this,'' he shouted, turning to me. By his look I knew what he wanted, I harshly pulled out the dagger that was in my pocket and it glinted coldly in the sunlight. Not thinking about it I sliced the air and it connected with her throat, she let out a sound halfway between a wail and a gurgle as she collapsed on the hard concrete.
I heard Aleiha gasp and struggle to get to me, ''What have you done?!'' She hissed hatred through her gritted teeth and looked for a second down at the girl before running off. I was scared as I looked down, the girl was splayed out awkwardly, her eyes staring blankly as blood flowed freely from the wound I had inflicted. I staggered back, not knowing what to do, before running out of the alley after Arann. I saw someone look over at me and see the blood on my hands and shirt, rushing towards the alley they ran down the alley as I sped up panicked. Not moments later I heard a scream for the police.
As soon as I knew, not more than a half hour later, I heard a bang on the door. The police. They took me into custody and without so much as a word they locked me in jail.

TranceComics

08 Mar, 2013, 1:07 am

(Story on internet)

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