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Dawn shoved her gooey mulch down her throat.Sparx looked on,thinnking/HOW could she EAT that stuff?!/He gave her some of his."Take it.""Thank you..."Dawn glacened at Bakufan."He was just joking!"said Choop."I hope.."she acdded silently under her breath,so no-one could hear.No one did.
Terrance was shocked from James' remark and felt a bit guilty afterward. "How could have we forgotten about him," he wondered, "I didn't even know he was kidnapped for that long." Scortch shrugged. "Though I just met him, I guess his coloration has been created from his feelings," he replied, "someone should follow him. He's been hit hard and we shouldn't make him take off like that." He then looked at Bakufun. "He is your brother," he told him, "maybe you should follow him and try to turn him around."
"Look,it IS probaly wrong,but maybe...maybe since he evolved...something went wrong?Maybe that is why his colour's wrong.Maybe,something evil got into him..."Sparx said."It's just not like him to be like that..."
Terrance sighed. "If only we remembered," he exclaimed, "he wouldn't be like this." Scortch looked out the door, not sure if someone else would go. "If he's dark and mad like me," he replied, "maybe I should try to bring him back." Bakufun sighed. "I wouldn't try," he denied, "I'm older than him and if I can't do it, then probably no one can turn him around." Scortch's flame on his tail grew intense. "Let me just try," he retaliated, "I got mad from my transformation and I could deal with it. Why not him?" He walked out of the room, and scanned the snowy area for any black Typhlosion. At first glance, Scortch saw nothing, but after walking a few feet, he saw James, cursing under his breath. He walked up to him carefully.
Sparx saw Scortch walk back into the cave.He was hugging himself in pain.Terrance rushed over to him,very angry at James for hurting one of his best friends.Sparx saw this in his face./Won't be long now.../he thought.All of a sudden,he said"I'm going.Now."his gloves & necklace glowing,he rushed out.He ran,and ran,eventually finding James.He used tackle,and caught him by suprise."I KNOW I'M RIGHT!"he screamed,before unleashing raw blasts of White Energy from the glowing gloves & necklace."DONT WORRY JAMES.THEY ONLY HURT BAD CREATURES!THEY WILL DRIVE OUT THE EVIL!"
Scortch held his arm, and growled in pain. "That Typhlosion is crazy," he said, "yet he needs space. I'm not sure if revenge is a good idea." Terrance handled him carefully. "He'll learn his lesson," he replied, feeling a bit angry from his ordeal. He saw Sparx storm out. "Goodness," Terrance thought, "everyone wants to calm him down. Are we all going to be injured from his anger?" From Sparx's depart, things would get very painful, very quickly.
Dusk ignored the raging typlosion, James. She had no idea who he was, but he seemed to speak truth. She layed down next to Semara, hoping she would be revived. In moments like these, she wished she had 'people' skills and healing. She heard the two brothers arguing outside. She was a little suprised they forgot him, he was Baku's brother! Baku came back in and Wicca said something, but her exaustion from the morning took over and her vision was soon black. Her dreams were filled with the forest she had lived in so long, and alone. She was staring up at the light shi.ning down from the trees, when white light and a large boom filled the sky. She was flown back, and trapped under a fallen tree. She fainted and when she woke, the place was practically barren. Snow was falling from the sky and she squirmed out from under the tree. She was suprisingly calm... all of her horrible past was gone.
Semara woke up the next morning feeling tired and hungry, but over all better. Dusk was beside her, sound asleep with a smile on her face. Semara stretched and yawned. Her Hunger told her to check her satchel for any food. But upon checking it, Not a speck of food was to be found! Someone must have chowed down last night! She growled and put the satchel on. She had worked hard to find all of it! The absol then walked back over to Dusk, waiting for the lion-like pokemon to wake up.
(I said the comment wrong which is why I deleted it.) Terrance and Scortch heard a bang outside. "What was that," Scortch asked. "I don't know," Terrance replied. They ran outside, seeing James looking at a building with a big hole in it's wall. "What happened," Scortch asked him. James sighed. "Sparx attacked me and thought I was evil," he growled, "so I threw him through a building and he appears out-cold from here." Terrance and Scortch's eyes widened and they ran towards the building. When they got to the building, they saw Sparx lying on the floor, not moving and shedding blood. "Oh crap," Terrance thought. They walked through the hole, stopping inches from Sparx. "There's no way we can carry him out of here," Scortch commented. Terrance nodded and ran to the hole's entrance. "CAN SOMEONE HELP US GET HIM OUT OF HERE," Terrance shouted, "WE GOT AN UNCONSCIOUS FLAME POKEMON THAT'S ON THE VERGE OF PASSING AWAY!!"
Semara heard shouting in the distance and ran out of the shelter to accese what was going on. (She was asleep when James came back) A charmander was heavily damaged and bleeding with litlle slivers of glass all over. She began to pull out the glass and examine the little fellow. "I can't do anything for him, last night someone stole all of my supplies!" She said helplessly. "But what I can do is bring him to the shelter. She then lifted Sparx onto her back and carefully walked back the shelter, where she then laid him down. "What in Arceus's name is going on here?!"
(Raven: Sparx is a Charizard. Scortch is the Charmander. ; ) ) Scortch and Terrance were thankful for Semara's help, though stunned at the same time. "Carrying a Charizard," Terrance questioned, "I guess she has carried heavy things in her life." They went back to the room, noticing that Sparx's injuries were healing up slowly but surely. "So the supplies were stolen," Scortch asked, "who would do that? I guess someone is after us." Terrance nodded. "The question is," he added, "who is it?"
As Sparx slept(Can't find better word :P),he began to have,say,dreams,in a way.He screamed,but no-one heard.No-one knew.One moment he was in his worst fear,drowning.The next,he was floating unconcious through blackness,then he was back,way back,to the moments with his trainer.Catching pokemon.Unknown to the others,he has the same trainer as Skar,Dawn and 2 others.He saw Dawn in a cage.Skar in a cage.Yokyi in a cage and Shoar.He wept,and wept.He screamed again,but the same result.
(Oh 0-0 crap...uh she lifted him with pyschic then) The absol's stomach growled, it took alot of strength to move that charizard...She yawned and looked back at the two unevolved pokemon.
Pixel and Digit finally made it too the city where they met their friends... (Ive written too much already, I posted a very long part and then I realize you guys left the forest or something... I have failed the rp... : ( )
(coolethanps2: It's okay man. So many things are being added very quickly. BTW Moni, the injured "Charmander" is actually a "Charizard", who is Sparx. Also guys, tell me when the comments get full [for those who are on a 3DS]. I'll be happy to upload another one. ; ) )
As Sparx's injuries were healing, Terrance heard Rose run in quickly, saying that Wicca was in trouble. "Wicca left," Terrance asked, "for how long?" "Not too long ago," Rose replied, "anyway, I sensed that he's being struck by a Ninetails!" "Who should go with," Scortch asked, cutting into the conversation. Sparx was still injured and no one wanted to leave him by himself while he was still unconscious.
Semara noticed The charmander looking reluctant at leaving the other fire type. "Go Scortch, Don't worry I'll watch over Sparx." She said as she put snow on some of the charizards wounds.
Scortch nodded at Semara. He looked at Terrance, signaling if he would go or not. "Yes," Terrance replied, "I will." He looked around the room. His eyes suddenly widened, noticing that James wasn't in the room. "Uh oh," Terrance added, "is he gone, too? That is not a good sign." Scortch shrugged and they headed out the door. "We'll be back," Terrance called, "...I promise!" They ran through the forest, not sure how far Wicca and James had walked. They came to a frozen lake, where there was some roaring and growling in the distance. "Oh gosh," Terrance thought. Scortch and Terrance carefully walked over the lake and saw an Umbreon shaped figure, lying helpless on the icy ground around a Ninetails and a Typhlosion. "Wicca..." Terrance guessed, though he didn't move because he wasn't sure if it was him. They trudded closer and Terrance took a close look at its eyes. It was him, but before he could say anything, the Typhlosion, which was dark in color, punched the icy ground, making Wicca fall through the lake. "NO," Terrance shouted, "WICCA!!"
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02 Mar, 2013, 6:27 pm
Dawn shoved her gooey mulch down her throat.Sparx looked on,thinnking/HOW could she EAT that stuff?!/He gave her some of his."Take it.""Thank you..."Dawn glacened at Bakufan."He was just joking!"said Choop."I hope.."she acdded silently under her breath,so no-one could hear.No one did.
02 Mar, 2013, 6:28 pm
(His is his oran berry)
03 Mar, 2013, 6:45 am
Terrance was shocked from James' remark and felt a bit guilty afterward. "How could have we forgotten about him," he wondered, "I didn't even know he was kidnapped for that long." Scortch shrugged. "Though I just met him, I guess his coloration has been created from his feelings," he replied, "someone should follow him. He's been hit hard and we shouldn't make him take off like that." He then looked at Bakufun. "He is your brother," he told him, "maybe you should follow him and try to turn him around."
03 Mar, 2013, 3:36 pm
"Look,it IS probaly wrong,but maybe...maybe since he evolved...something went wrong?Maybe that is why his colour's wrong.Maybe,something evil got into him..."Sparx said."It's just not like him to be like that..."
03 Mar, 2013, 7:21 pm
Terrance sighed. "If only we remembered," he exclaimed, "he wouldn't be like this." Scortch looked out the door, not sure if someone else would go. "If he's dark and mad like me," he replied, "maybe I should try to bring him back." Bakufun sighed. "I wouldn't try," he denied, "I'm older than him and if I can't do it, then probably no one can turn him around." Scortch's flame on his tail grew intense. "Let me just try," he retaliated, "I got mad from my transformation and I could deal with it. Why not him?" He walked out of the room, and scanned the snowy area for any black Typhlosion. At first glance, Scortch saw nothing, but after walking a few feet, he saw James, cursing under his breath. He walked up to him carefully.
03 Mar, 2013, 8:05 pm
Sparx saw Scortch walk back into the cave.He was hugging himself in pain.Terrance rushed over to him,very angry at James for hurting one of his best friends.Sparx saw this in his face./Won't be long now.../he thought.All of a sudden,he said"I'm going.Now."his gloves & necklace glowing,he rushed out.He ran,and ran,eventually finding James.He used tackle,and caught him by suprise."I KNOW I'M RIGHT!"he screamed,before unleashing raw blasts of White Energy from the glowing gloves & necklace."DONT WORRY JAMES.THEY ONLY HURT BAD CREATURES!THEY WILL DRIVE OUT THE EVIL!"
03 Mar, 2013, 8:40 pm
Scortch held his arm, and growled in pain. "That Typhlosion is crazy," he said, "yet he needs space. I'm not sure if revenge is a good idea." Terrance handled him carefully. "He'll learn his lesson," he replied, feeling a bit angry from his ordeal. He saw Sparx storm out. "Goodness," Terrance thought, "everyone wants to calm him down. Are we all going to be injured from his anger?" From Sparx's depart, things would get very painful, very quickly.
03 Mar, 2013, 9:49 pm
Dusk ignored the raging typlosion, James. She had no idea who he was, but he seemed to speak truth. She layed down next to Semara, hoping she would be revived. In moments like these, she wished she had 'people' skills and healing. She heard the two brothers arguing outside. She was a little suprised they forgot him, he was Baku's brother! Baku came back in and Wicca said something, but her exaustion from the morning took over and her vision was soon black. Her dreams were filled with the forest she had lived in so long, and alone. She was staring up at the light shi.ning down from the trees, when white light and a large boom filled the sky. She was flown back, and trapped under a fallen tree. She fainted and when she woke, the place was practically barren. Snow was falling from the sky and she squirmed out from under the tree. She was suprisingly calm... all of her horrible past was gone.
04 Mar, 2013, 6:18 am
Semara woke up the next morning feeling tired and hungry, but over all better. Dusk was beside her, sound asleep with a smile on her face. Semara stretched and yawned. Her Hunger told her to check her satchel for any food. But upon checking it, Not a speck of food was to be found! Someone must have chowed down last night! She growled and put the satchel on. She had worked hard to find all of it! The absol then walked back over to Dusk, waiting for the lion-like pokemon to wake up.
04 Mar, 2013, 11:04 pm
(I said the comment wrong which is why I deleted it.) Terrance and Scortch heard a bang outside. "What was that," Scortch asked. "I don't know," Terrance replied. They ran outside, seeing James looking at a building with a big hole in it's wall. "What happened," Scortch asked him. James sighed. "Sparx attacked me and thought I was evil," he growled, "so I threw him through a building and he appears out-cold from here." Terrance and Scortch's eyes widened and they ran towards the building. When they got to the building, they saw Sparx lying on the floor, not moving and shedding blood. "Oh crap," Terrance thought. They walked through the hole, stopping inches from Sparx. "There's no way we can carry him out of here," Scortch commented. Terrance nodded and ran to the hole's entrance. "CAN SOMEONE HELP US GET HIM OUT OF HERE," Terrance shouted, "WE GOT AN UNCONSCIOUS FLAME POKEMON THAT'S ON THE VERGE OF PASSING AWAY!!"
05 Mar, 2013, 7:08 am
Semara heard shouting in the distance and ran out of the shelter to accese what was going on. (She was asleep when James came back) A charmander was heavily damaged and bleeding with litlle slivers of glass all over. She began to pull out the glass and examine the little fellow. "I can't do anything for him, last night someone stole all of my supplies!" She said helplessly. "But what I can do is bring him to the shelter. She then lifted Sparx onto her back and carefully walked back the shelter, where she then laid him down. "What in Arceus's name is going on here?!"
05 Mar, 2013, 6:47 pm
(Raven: Sparx is a Charizard. Scortch is the Charmander. ; ) ) Scortch and Terrance were thankful for Semara's help, though stunned at the same time. "Carrying a Charizard," Terrance questioned, "I guess she has carried heavy things in her life." They went back to the room, noticing that Sparx's injuries were healing up slowly but surely. "So the supplies were stolen," Scortch asked, "who would do that? I guess someone is after us." Terrance nodded. "The question is," he added, "who is it?"
05 Mar, 2013, 8:24 pm
As Sparx slept(Can't find better word :P),he began to have,say,dreams,in a way.He screamed,but no-one heard.No-one knew.One moment he was in his worst fear,drowning.The next,he was floating unconcious through blackness,then he was back,way back,to the moments with his trainer.Catching pokemon.Unknown to the others,he has the same trainer as Skar,Dawn and 2 others.He saw Dawn in a cage.Skar in a cage.Yokyi in a cage and Shoar.He wept,and wept.He screamed again,but the same result.
06 Mar, 2013, 2:41 am
(Oh 0-0 crap...uh she lifted him with pyschic then)
The absol's stomach growled, it took alot of strength to move that charizard...She yawned and looked back at the two unevolved pokemon.
06 Mar, 2013, 2:42 am
(Can I introduce a new character into this? They'll be the one who stole the supplies.)
06 Mar, 2013, 7:53 am
Pixel and Digit finally made it too the city where they met their friends... (Ive written too much already, I posted a very long part and then I realize you guys left the forest or something... I have failed the rp... : ( )
06 Mar, 2013, 11:58 pm
(coolethanps2: It's okay man. So many things are being added very quickly. BTW Moni, the injured "Charmander" is actually a "Charizard", who is Sparx. Also guys, tell me when the comments get full [for those who are on a 3DS]. I'll be happy to upload another one. ; ) )
07 Mar, 2013, 12:05 am
As Sparx's injuries were healing, Terrance heard Rose run in quickly, saying that Wicca was in trouble. "Wicca left," Terrance asked, "for how long?" "Not too long ago," Rose replied, "anyway, I sensed that he's being struck by a Ninetails!" "Who should go with," Scortch asked, cutting into the conversation. Sparx was still injured and no one wanted to leave him by himself while he was still unconscious.
07 Mar, 2013, 5:05 am
Semara noticed The charmander looking reluctant at leaving the other fire type. "Go Scortch, Don't worry I'll watch over Sparx." She said as she put snow on some of the charizards wounds.
07 Mar, 2013, 10:33 pm
Scortch nodded at Semara. He looked at Terrance, signaling if he would go or not. "Yes," Terrance replied, "I will." He looked around the room. His eyes suddenly widened, noticing that James wasn't in the room. "Uh oh," Terrance added, "is he gone, too? That is not a good sign." Scortch shrugged and they headed out the door. "We'll be back," Terrance called, "...I promise!" They ran through the forest, not sure how far Wicca and James had walked. They came to a frozen lake, where there was some roaring and growling in the distance. "Oh gosh," Terrance thought. Scortch and Terrance carefully walked over the lake and saw an Umbreon shaped figure, lying helpless on the icy ground around a Ninetails and a Typhlosion. "Wicca..." Terrance guessed, though he didn't move because he wasn't sure if it was him. They trudded closer and Terrance took a close look at its eyes. It was him, but before he could say anything, the Typhlosion, which was dark in color, punched the icy ground, making Wicca fall through the lake. "NO," Terrance shouted, "WICCA!!"