The story begins. (Max Cloud) Its heard to believe its bin a week since i started this but i promised my friends that i would see this through to the end. *He walks through the desert gided by an old map* (Max) This makes no sents its suposte to be righte here. *he looks around and sees nothing but just then he hears somthing* (Max) What is that? *He sees a sand storm coming* (Max) Perfect just perfect this sand storm came out of no were. *Just then he remembers the righting on the map*
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27 Feb, 2013, 12:23 am
(Max) Thats it the map told of a test to reach the first tribe the test of couraeg the grate sand wall. *The map read thoes how have the couraeg to face the unknown will pass unharmed* (Max) Ok here i go. *He runs full speed flys up in to the sky and srate through the great sand wall and lands safe on the other side* (Max) I made it to the earth tribe. *He can see an old pony coming to him (Clif) Greetings im shaman clif leader of the earth tribe and you are? (Max) My name is Max Cloud i came here to learn what my element is. (Clif) Than you came to the right place we of the four tribes welcome all how are willing to learn. (Max) thank you. (Clif) No poblem now lets git started. * The traning was heard but max got thorugh a month had past and the time of the elementil ceremony had come* (Clif) Are you ready max? (Max) Yes. *He preformed the style but nothing happened* (Clif) It seams earth is not your element but dont fret you have come so far maybe the Air tribe can help. (Max) Thank you for everythig. (Clif) No problem and be safe. (Max) I will good buy. *and so on that happy note max continued his journey for his true element. / Part 2 Coming soon /
27 Feb, 2013, 10:08 pm
Oke pretty good :), May I ask in whitch country you live??
27 Feb, 2013, 11:02 pm
Im in the USA.