fantastic job!i love your style

My mouth quivered. I couldn't say anything. I didn't even start the fight, why must I punished for it!? "Th-th-this wasn't even my doing!" I cried out. I knew he was looking at my black eye, just by his amused-half-snarl expression. "I doubt that. Even if you didn't you needed to soon to play scapegoat before your time was done. Now... stand still." I drew in a sharp, deep breath and blinked my eyes more. Oh goddess, it felt as if a river was pushing my eyelids!

REALLY GOOD!

I watched his horn glow as he revealed his whip. I had seen whippings before, I was probably one of the only ones who had never received one. Not anymore, he thought to myself with a dreadful smile on my face. I felt my blackeye pulse as I waited for the first strike. /Crack!/ I yelled out in agony as it tore through my left foreleg. The pain felt more contrated than anything I ever felt in my life, even worse than the first time I was burned.

Then he whipped the same leg three times in quick sucession. I bit my lip hard as looked down at the pool of blood forming around my hoof. My eyes were getting blurry with tears. The cuts, not lacerations, /cuts/ were deep. Typical of Dr.Hans; he always did he worst with the first few swipes. My legs shook and I crouched, wanting to lay down. "Ah-ah-ah Alex-boy. You know the rules." His face looked more wolfish than usual. "Stand!" and cracked the whip across my face. There weren't any cuts on the outside, but the force of it pused my teeth into my cheek. My black eye pulsed even more than before.

He was relentless, never stopping, never hitting me with a blow weaker than the last. Sometimes he would use his magic to keep whipping to throw some painfully accurate imsults. I had to sit, no stand through that and the tears rushed out like waterfalls. "Now thats a good whipping boy!" he yelled and aimed one last deep cut my wing. I collasped. Everything hurt.,Everyone left. I couldn't lick my wounds. It all hurt. So, the pain lulled me into the deepest sleeep, deep, painful.

Both the story and the writing are incredible. Happy Valentine's Day, Athens! :)

Poor alexeev...

DONE

You are a beautiful writer and author!

And artist!