Pic is NOT finished! Ok, the reason why I upload this is because a comment of chapter 1 was deleted! x.x (d*mn you colors :`( ) now I´m re-writing the story on this pic! v.v
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12 Jan, 2013, 2:11 pm
Chapter 1: The end of a new life
It says that a person who is near to death lives through his whole life again in a kind of timelapse, the world slows down while the memories of the past are shown before his eyes. Is this what Alex experienced in this moment?
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12 Jan, 2013, 2:13 pm
Ooooh! Looks awesome! Can't wait to read the chapters! :D
12 Jan, 2013, 2:14 pm
He opened his eyes again, feeling exhausted. Alex laid on the dusty ground of former New York Zero. The fight has totally destroyed this part of the city, the buildings where once thousands of people resided were only ruins now. Crows circled in the red sky above him.
12 Jan, 2013, 2:20 pm
With his last strenght, Alex pulled himself up on his feet, still faltering a bit. He looked up to the cause of the destrucion, this powerful, 30 feet tall, monstrous beast. Noone who have seen it in this moment will ever think that it was once human. "What have they done to you Paryiah?", Alex thought.
It didn´t take long for the mutant to get awareness of the presence of the man. It turned his head, red insect-like eyes now staring at him. It roared and suddenly thousands of his minions appeared, crawling out from the ruins of Manhattan, heading towards Alex.
12 Jan, 2013, 2:20 pm
will you please be my friend? i really like your artwork. my fc is two four nine two-five zero three five-seven four four nine. add me asap and leave your fc in my most recent pics please! i look forward to seeing you in my friends list! XD
12 Jan, 2013, 2:24 pm
The assassin needed just a few, well-aimed strikes with his hidden blades to kill them, but after the death of one their number just increased exponentially. After clearing off the first wave, even more infected appeared, one stronger than the other. If Alex hadn´t been immune to the infection, he would´ve already died a long time ago. Alex felt himself getting weaker again, the pain and the exhaustion coming from the never ending fight were dulling his senses.
12 Jan, 2013, 2:28 pm
"Am I gonna die like this?", Alex asked himself. He thought about the things that would happen if he failed. The templars couldn´t control the infected anymore, not as long as Paryiah lived. The infection would most likely spread over the whole world if it ended like this. No, the assassin wouldn´t ever let this happen!
Maybe there was still a last chance... Even if he refused to do this his whole life, even if he couldn´t control himself anymore after doing this, the other option was much worse. All that mattered is that there would be still hope left.
12 Jan, 2013, 2:31 pm
As the next wave of infected was approaching, Alex pulled down his hood and took off his white assassin jacket, tossing it aside. Slowly but steady, he felt a new dark power forming in his body.
"I won´t die today!", Alex growled, starting to run towards the beasts.
12 Jan, 2013, 2:31 pm
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ok that was the first chapter (again v.v)
12 Jan, 2013, 3:13 pm
I love this story! It's amazing so far! Keep it up! :D
12 Jan, 2013, 11:23 pm
Sorry.. not my REAL friendcode. its my pokemon white 2 friendcode. :P
13 Jan, 2013, 12:44 am
awesome!!!
13 Jan, 2013, 6:08 am
Well finished or not this is still epic! So your doing a whole story?! Sweet! Any yes Id love to still rp ^^ Im using Sora soooo whenever your ready I am :D
13 Jan, 2013, 6:17 am
may i join ur contest? even if i havn't created any OC's? (i haven't drawn anything... -o- )
great story and picture! Cannot wait for the final draft!
13 Jan, 2013, 8:40 am
(Nerdy): ofc you can join :)
13 Jan, 2013, 11:47 am
I cant wait when you finished this pic!! *O* Plz let me know...!!
13 Jan, 2013, 9:42 pm
Hi! As promised on mii-verse, I proof read it, corrected some grammar but also tried to improve readability by revising the build-up of some sentences.
I hope you won't feel like I butchered it, though... I tried to make it easier to read - it's your choice which version to use in the final version you send to print, of course (as you really should publish it, worth it for the artwork alone)... also hope you don't mind using internet to read it.
13 Jan, 2013, 9:42 pm
Chapter 1: The end of a new life
Some say a person near death lives through his whole life again - in a kind of timelapse. the world will slow down, while the memories of the past are shown before his eyes. Is this what Alex experienced this moment?
He opened his eyes again, feeling exhausted. Alex was lying down on the dusty ground of former New York Zero. The fight had completely destroyed this part of the city, as the buildings where millions of people resided once were only ruins now. Crows circled in the red sky above him.
13 Jan, 2013, 9:42 pm
With his last strength, Alex pulled himself up on his feet, still faltering a bit. He looked up to the cause of the destrucion - a powerful, 30 feet tall, monstrous beast. None who would see it in this moment would ever think that it was once human. "What have they done to you, Paryiah?", Alex thought.
It didn´t take long for the mutant to notice the presence of the man. It turned his head, it's red, insect-like eyes now staring down at him. It roared - and suddenly thousands of his minions appeared, crawling out from inside the ruins of Manhattan. All heading towards Alex.
13 Jan, 2013, 9:42 pm
The skilled Assassin needed just a few, well-aimed strikes with his hidden blades to kill them. But with each dying infected, their number just increased exponentially. He cleared the first wave, each minion even stronger than the other. If he wasn´t immune to this infection, he would´ve already died a long time ago. Alex felt himself getting weaker again, the pain and the exhaustion caused by this never ending fight were beginning to dull his senses.
"Am I gonna die like this?", he asked himself, while he thought about the things that would happen if he failed. The Templars couldn´t control the infected anymore, not as long Paryiah still lives. Unstoppable by the military, the infection will most likely spread over the entire world if it were to end like this.
13 Jan, 2013, 9:42 pm
No! - the assassin can´t ever let this happen. Maybe there was still a last chance... Even if it´s a risk, one which he refused to do his whole life. Even if he couldn´t control himself anymore after doing this - the other option was much worse. All that mattered is that there's still hope left.
As the next wave of infected was approaching, Alex pulled down his hood and took off his white assassin jacket, tossing it aside. Slowly but steadily, he felt a new, dark power forming in his body.
"I won´t die today!", Alex growled, while he started to run towards the beasts.