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Chapter Two: Meet Inferno There's one place where all the heroes of Equestria begin, and that's the Canterlot Gaurd School (C.G.S), one hero is begining his journey now. "Yeeeeee-hooooo!" Inferno, a light gray pegasis with black hair with a white streak, yelled. He kicks something off his desk, "Take that changling!!!!!" "Inferno, you're going to get in trouble!" whispered his best friend, Shining Armor, a white unicorn with blue hair and a white streak. "C'mon Shining," said Inferno," you gotta stop playning it safe, I highly doubt you'll be captain of the gaurd, even if you are I'll be commander, Commander Inferno, I like that." "How can you be commander if you don't have your cutie mark." Inferno glared at him," You know that's a touchy subject." "Ya, well you were getting annoying." Then the teacher, a muscly black earth pony with a orange mohawk. "Inferno!!!!!" Later that day Shining met up with Inferno at the Detention Hall. "Smooth" Shining said. "Ehh!" Inferno replied,"I'm sooooo bored!!!!" "We're not old enough to go into the Shooting Range" (Authors Note: They're the CMC's age... let's just say this CMC:seven Twilight, AJ, Pinkie, and Rarity: twenty-one Fluttershy and Rainbowdash:twenty-two) "I know!!!!!" Inferno exclaimed, "Get a towel." "Kay" Shining replied. "Meet up at the square." They went in different directions. Inferno ran into his house, where his older brother, Spark, a darker gray pegasis with lightning hair, was putting on some armor.

"Sorry Inferno, you'll have to spend the day with Shining again" said his older brother. "That's fine" he replied, running out of the kitchen with a buckket of water in his wing. He meet's up with Shining in the square, levating a towel. "What's the towel for?" Shining asked. "To clean up," Inferno replied, "Follow me!" He ran all through town trying not to spill the water. Soon they aproached two big double doors. "Are you serious?!" Shining asked. "Ya I am! Crack open the door," Inferno replied," Good." Inferno flew up and put the bucket ontop of the door. He flew back down. "Now we wait." Soon Princess Celestia walks out, the bucket of water getting her soaked. Before the bucket landed Shining caught it. Celestia didn't get mad but smiled and said," Such tricksters." The next day as the two friends walked in the C.G.C. they got soaked. Celestia walked up with two towels and handed to each pony. Shining and Inferno looked at each other and busted out laighing.