first-person haunting by whoppernugget

"You don't know until they come for you" This is my very first upload to the gallery, so please critique me in every neccessary way!

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
30 Dec, 2012, 11:34 pm
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cablll

30 Dec, 2012, 11:58 pm

y know thars suposr to be slender right

YamiMidna

31 Dec, 2012, 12:01 am

woho you want a honest critique? x3 ok!

Well the 3d and the tree aren´t bad, also the hand is ok.
What you should improve: add shadows (especially in a pic like that). Try to give yourself more time with details, so that it´ll look neat. The background and the shady figure could also look better when redone. I´m missing more black, and I mean darkest black in this pic. That´ll rise the contrast and give the picture more depth.

whoppernugget

31 Dec, 2012, 1:49 am

ok, thanks! I'll be sure to try to incorporate those in the future.

whoppernugget

31 Dec, 2012, 1:50 am

btw, go skyarmy!

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