Marco POV: When i saw the monster it looked like my friend Leails. The thing was a dark orange with dark pink hair covering her left eye. Her shirt was a dark purple and was torn. Her pants were also torn but a dark blue. "L-Leails is t-that you?" I asked the creature. The creature smiled and then showed me my parents, dead and torn apart. I gasped "What did you do to them?!" Tears were rolling down my face. The thing laughed, and bolted past me out the door.......
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29 Dec, 2012, 9:39 am
Marco POV: I bolted to the kitchin to call Carly and Leails. I called Carly first,
Carly: Hi Marco!
Marco: Carly!!!! Something bad has happend!!
Carly: Whats wrong Marco??
Marco: There was this creature in my living room, EATING my PARENTS!
Carly: What?! You call 911, I'll call Leails!
Marco: Ok...,
*Hangs up*
29 Dec, 2012, 9:43 am
Carly POV: *Calls Leails*
Leails: Hello?
Carly: Leails!! Something happend to Marco's parents!!
Leails: What happend??
Carly: Well there was a creature in his living room....
Leails: Ok what was it doin?
Carly: Eating his parents!!!
Leails: What?! I'll get my dad, you go to Marco's!
Carly: Roger!
*Hangs up* i bolt out the door to Marco's place
29 Dec, 2012, 10:41 am
can i join
29 Dec, 2012, 11:20 am
Hello ^^ Leah ... i saw your comment in my sisters Gallery .... ^^ Thanks
29 Dec, 2012, 12:33 pm
whos your sister
29 Dec, 2012, 4:30 pm
the story is sooooooo epic! :D
31 Dec, 2012, 5:41 pm
Can I join?