Cinos's POV: "I don't care who he is, just get him off me!" Sam spat. I walked foward with Leails and we both took Flame. "Grr, my feathers are all blo.ody, I'm going to go wash this crap off." Sam said. "I'll be back later." Shock raised an eyebrow. "Who put her shorts in a bunch?" I shrugged. "I'm gonna take care of him." I pointed to Flame. "I'll help Leails added. The two of us began to work as Shock, Flameno and Inferno went to train the other people. Maria stayed. "What are you doing sweety?" I asked. "I wanna help. When we get hurt I wanna be able to fix us too."
Flame's POV: My eyes slowly adjust to the light. I hurt, all over. I slowly roll over and stand up, failing. A wave of nausea washes over me. I try to stand up again, only to notice a trail of blo.od. Something draws me to follow it. I track it for about a half a mile, unseen. I can hear a river rushing by. What would blo.od be doing there?
(And also,Flame hates me.....Because I wear Mixed Colors, and adding onto that, he CUT my dress in half with his flames.To...be honest....it kinda seems p.erverted....)
Comments
28 Dec, 2012, 9:17 pm
i'am happy that i read your story :)
28 Dec, 2012, 11:24 pm
Me to!
28 Dec, 2012, 11:49 pm
The story is amazing so far! : D
29 Dec, 2012, 1:14 am
its is amazing...OMFG BLOODY FEATHER AAAAAHHHH *feather falls off from blue wing* AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH NOW IM LOSING MY ENTIRE WINGSSSS!
29 Dec, 2012, 1:39 am
i hav sum advice. NEVER QUIT. this is sooo awesum.
29 Dec, 2012, 1:54 am
Cinos's POV: "I don't care who he is, just get him off me!" Sam spat. I walked foward with Leails and we both took Flame. "Grr, my feathers are all blo.ody, I'm going to go wash this crap off." Sam said. "I'll be back later." Shock raised an eyebrow. "Who put her shorts in a bunch?" I shrugged. "I'm gonna take care of him." I pointed to Flame. "I'll help Leails added. The two of us began to work as Shock, Flameno and Inferno went to train the other people. Maria stayed. "What are you doing sweety?" I asked. "I wanna help. When we get hurt I wanna be able to fix us too."
29 Dec, 2012, 1:59 am
Flame's POV: My eyes slowly adjust to the light. I hurt, all over. I slowly roll over and stand up, failing. A wave of nausea washes over me. I try to stand up again, only to notice a trail of blo.od. Something draws me to follow it. I track it for about a half a mile, unseen. I can hear a river rushing by. What would blo.od be doing there?
29 Dec, 2012, 2:04 am
ewe best. story. evar! *whispers* could i be in it? btw my wings are dissapearing and I lost my aura...
29 Dec, 2012, 5:10 am
yay! :D
29 Dec, 2012, 5:29 am
Hi its Sonic fan girl 1 here with my account for MY comic
30 Dec, 2012, 1:35 am
Oooooooo......:0 *wings fall completley off* NUUUUUUUUUU!!!
(Im really wondering....did you see my comments?)
30 Dec, 2012, 3:03 am
(Yay...and thanks too)
30 Dec, 2012, 3:35 am
(And also,Flame hates me.....Because I wear Mixed Colors, and adding onto that, he CUT my dress in half with his flames.To...be honest....it kinda seems p.erverted....)
30 Dec, 2012, 6:08 am
I'd like Mora in a story, but it's ok if you don't want me to be in this... But Mora is Shock's fiancee, btw. ....I'ma stop botherin. ^v^'
31 Dec, 2012, 6:16 am
I love this story!
31 Dec, 2012, 2:16 pm
Me 2! 8D
01 Jan, 2013, 6:00 pm
ewe (Btw im gonna draw how I look like in the story)
01 Jan, 2013, 8:35 pm
Awesome! I got to baby sit Flam! Yus!
01 Jan, 2013, 8:52 pm
(Also.... scince im marrying shadow im technicly Infernos step sis. :o And Flameno is.... you know what.)
02 Jan, 2013, 1:33 am
i hope cinos is ok! by the way this story is awesome!
03 Jan, 2013, 5:10 pm
if cinos dies (woudnt mind btw) can she say "Inferno do it for me" like Maria said to Shadow? idk just a thought.
03 Jan, 2013, 11:33 pm
OMAGEEZ THIS STORY IS AWSOME SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!
04 Jan, 2013, 11:01 pm
(Btw I posted how I look in the story)
09 Jan, 2013, 8:18 pm
flame saved her!XD nice!