Chronicles of The Outsiders Chap1Fateful Encounter by Hamlad

Emiko a Sanyu had just arived in Inprobeburg. "Wow, this place is huge!", said Emiko, running about starring at everything. Sanyu shock her head and giggled. Emiko suddenly stopped and looked quizingly ahead."What's that?", she asked, indicating a large church like building at the top of the hill. A long line of Pokemon streched from there all the way to were they stood. "I don't know." said Sanyu. "Why don't we go to the top-" She stopped realizing Emiko was already bounding up the hill.

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15 Dec, 2012, 12:48 pm
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Hamlad

15 Dec, 2012, 1:29 pm

"Emiko, wait!" At the top Emiko saw an angry ardenpix, a crying Pichu, and a smug inprobepix. The ardenpix growled "You better give me a good reason not to pummel you!" The inprobepix scoffed "How about I'm inprobepix perfection and your ardenpix scum!" Outraged Emiko shouted "That's not fair, we're all evolutions of pupix!" "I'm nothing like you scum," he said darkly. Inocently Emiko said "Yes you are." He slapped her hard. Sanyu had just reached the top. Seeing this she lashed out with a Thunder Fang. Inprobepix sneered "Hey stupid! I'm a ground type." The ardenpix butts in "This is my fight. Leave." Sanyu realy looked at the ardenpix, she felt such a jolt, seeing her birthmark on the legs of this Pokemon. "Wait, were did you-" She was cut of by a Pichu all had forgotten "Won't someone just save my trainer?" she said between sobs. "I won't unless you cough up the cash." said inprobepix, crossing his arms. Sanyu felt empathy for the little Pokemon, "I will." Shocked Emiko blurted "But, but what about my dream?" "You can do that latter. Helping this Pichu won't take long at all. Now where is your trainer?" "She's in Rataburg. We whent ther looking for medicine for our people." Sanyu suddenly was unsure. Rataburg wasn't realy a city. It was the turf of the viscious Ratagang headed by the undefeated Raticate. "Okay, Emiko lets go buy some supplies and head out." Emiko started to protest, but gave in.The ardenpix spook up "Name's Ronin. I know Rataburg well. I'm coming to help." Sanyu was excited, she might have a chance to learn about her birthmark. "Emiko is my name, and this is Sanyu." Sanyu smiled at Ronin, she smiled back. "Let's go to the Kecleon stores, they have the best rescue supplies in town." Together they set out to prepare for the journey ahead.

Ninja Kitteh

18 Dec, 2012, 1:44 pm

This is really good!btw i loved the story!:3

speed wolf

19 Dec, 2012, 12:42 am

awesome

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