Ch. 1: The Fire of Elementos by Fredi
Plz wait for long comment. And for those of you who dont know, Elementos is where Piff (me) and my BFF'S as ponys used to live. and the building on fire is Elementos Tower/Castle of Elementos.
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02 Dec, 2012, 10:29 pm
nice painting!
02 Dec, 2012, 10:34 pm
One late summers eve, three PBFFS that lived in Elementos Tower, were discussing some things
Haybale Vivre (pink pony): I think we should give up on the element thing, and start a new life.
Destiny Breeze (silver pony): There goes my idea.
HV:Sorry!
DB:Its ok, dont worry
Popcorn Blaze (old piff): That would mean another change! i hate such changes! And we just got the libary going with Rain Books!
HV: Yea...
DB: *sniffs air* Do you fillies smell smoke?
PB and HV sniffed the air.
HV: Piff...
PB: it wasent me! *Runs to window* GREEN JUSTICE???
The 3 PBFFS ran out side quickly.
GJ: Hey, B!TCH!
PB: i aint no b!tch, man w*ore!
GJ:IM a w*ore? I think its you, w*ore.
PB charged at GJ, tearing his skin with her horn, and pushing him in to the fire. GJ charged back. Piff jumped over top and over threw him in to the fire.
GJ: I'LL SEE YOU IN HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLL!!! were his final words.
Ponys from the village came out to watch Elementos burn to the ground. Nothing left, but the mint farm and the libary.
HV: no choice but to change our names and 'marks again.
Tears filled Piffs eyes. Destiny held her sisters/PBFFS hoof.
Piff nodded.
Haybale turned to the villagers
HV: PREPARE TO SEE THE FAUSTACORN! She'll help us... i hope.
Dark Wing held his GF, Sugar Mint.
DW: All we have for food is sone stuff from Sugars farm!
HV: it'll have to do! I'll need some ponys to help me build some shelters for the night please....
HV took over from there.
Piff: *thinking* good bye, old life. I guess i'll go back to my givin name and CM....
*END OF CHAPTER 1*
02 Dec, 2012, 10:42 pm
i can probably put you in as a villager.
03 Dec, 2012, 12:09 am
Yeshyeshyesh! I'm running the library!
03 Dec, 2012, 1:23 am
awesome ch.1 :)
03 Dec, 2012, 3:39 am
It's a pleasure to have my OC named in this story! Thanks. Lookin' great!
05 Dec, 2012, 12:07 am
SM&DW: piff will you the best mare plz?
05 Dec, 2012, 12:44 am
Piff: no duh!
05 Dec, 2012, 12:44 am
of course!
10 Dec, 2012, 9:46 pm
awesome so far! i think it'll be a great story!