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first, the intro! instead of showing a characters main personality trait or something important, write 10 pages describing how cool your emo sonic recolor mary sue oc design is :heart_eyes_cat: !!

then instead of giving that oc yk a personality, give them a sad backstory and a hot girlfriend!! :smirk_cat:

then write a fight scene, readers dont care about the story, only men touching eachother!! :scream_cat:

and add an unnecessary amount of angst over the littlest things!

#ohboywhat