WIP by AnonymousAndUnknown

#wip
He came again.
The turtle.
The stand hadn’t moved, but everything else had—color bled out of the world weeks ago.
The man behind the counter smiled the same mechanical smile.
“Lemonade?”
That word. It hit like glass grinding inside the skull.
The turtle didn’t answer. The air pulsed, hot and heavy, as he set his claws on the counter. The condensation on the lemonade jar trembled. The buzzing of a single fly grew louder. Too loud.
“Hey,” said the turtle.
“Bomp.”
Pause.
“Bomp.”
Longer pause.
“Bomp.”
The rhythm fractured. The world went still.
He reached beneath his shell. The metal was already warm—like it had been waiting. He raised it, hands steady, heart not.
“Empty it,” he said. “Everything.”
The man stared. “You don’t have to do this.”
It was the way he said you—as if he knew. As if he remembered the other times, the other stands, the other endings.
A drop of sweat slid down the man’s cheek. It reached his chin and hung there, trembling, before falling. The sound it made when it hit the counter was louder than breathing.
“Put your hands up.”
Another voice.
Behind him.
Flat, heavy, absolute.
The turtle turned slowly. The cop was there again, same as before. Maybe the same one. Maybe the only one.
“How did you know?” the turtle asked.
“A little birdy told me.”
The blue bird landed. Its feathers were slick with something dark. Its eyes were small, hollow tunnels.
“Jeff,” the turtle whispered.
(TO BE CONTINUED!)

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painted on a Nintendo Switch
14 Oct, 2025, 11:39 am
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AnonymousAndUnknown

14 Oct, 2025, 8:55 pm

(continuation)
The bird twitched. “It’s not my fault you keep coming back.”
The turtle’s grip faltered. The world bent sideways, the air thick with static. He could taste the sour tang of lemons, metallic and endless.
He looked at the man. The man’s face was melting into the cop’s, into Jeff’s, into his own. Every shape, the same. Every breath, recycled.
He heard laughter. It came from inside his shell.
“There’s no teaching an old turtle new tricks,” he said, or maybe the gun said it for him.
A flash. A sound. Then nothing.
When the stillness settled, the stand was gone. The pavement was gone. The world was gone.
Only the humming remained.
Three notes.
Low, familiar.
bomp... bomp... bomp...

AnonymousAndUnknown

14 Oct, 2025, 9:00 pm

@sh3rb3rt read mai masterpiece

AnonymousAndUnknown

14 Oct, 2025, 9:00 pm

you 2 @BigAria

BigAria

14 Oct, 2025, 9:28 pm

OH. MY. GOSH.

BigAria

14 Oct, 2025, 9:28 pm

HOW DO YOU WRITE SO GOOD :sob:

AnonymousAndUnknown

14 Oct, 2025, 9:30 pm

@BigAria i ran this through chat gpt 4 grammar and it was a rewrite of the 1 from our other convo

BigAria

14 Oct, 2025, 9:38 pm

:sob: its beautiful... :ok_woman:

AnonymousAndUnknown

14 Oct, 2025, 9:50 pm

@BigAria tyyyyy

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