yeah!! sorry i was busy and planning to respond later. For the hair, maybe make it more stringy? The hair is not one big piece on its own but rather individual pieces. now, the shading...
what i recommend is trying to understand the folds in the clothes. You need to understand where both ur light and darkness is coming from. if its SUPER dark, details will be less visible, if its SUPER light, it will be the same aswell. but looking from ur your drawing i believe its sort of in the middle so i recommend getting ride of that harsh black line under the neck and replacing it with a more dark brown.
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17 Jun, 2025, 4:36 pm
@skuli
17 Jun, 2025, 5:53 pm
@skuli feedback on anything?? Shading is probably where I struggle most
17 Jun, 2025, 5:58 pm
yeah!! sorry i was busy and planning to respond later. For the hair, maybe make it more stringy? The hair is not one big piece on its own but rather individual pieces. now, the shading...
17 Jun, 2025, 6:02 pm
what i recommend is trying to understand the folds in the clothes. You need to understand where both ur light and darkness is coming from. if its SUPER dark, details will be less visible, if its SUPER light, it will be the same aswell. but looking from ur your drawing i believe its sort of in the middle so i recommend getting ride of that harsh black line under the neck and replacing it with a more dark brown.
17 Jun, 2025, 6:03 pm
also, u need to remember when shading theres going to be harsh lines and soft line, thats why you need to use lots of references to understand that
colouring ur lineart would be a great add-on for ur artstyle!!! :3
17 Jun, 2025, 6:05 pm
@skuli Thank you so much for your feedback, I'll try making a drawing using your tips. :D
17 Jun, 2025, 6:07 pm
im sorry if i didn't help. im not very good at putting my thoughts into words :c
17 Jun, 2025, 6:07 pm
@skuli no worries!