page 1 by BrightheartXmisty
#ThundersArmy
a boy walked throught the woods, meeting a white
boy: whats up
he sits next to the kitsune, like they were old friends
kitsune: *dramatic bark*
boy: i feel ya
he tries petting the kitsune, but it gives him a warning snap
(yay, first page. sorry for terrible story bit. hope i did good
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04 May, 2025, 2:09 pm
@the_true_challanger
here is page 1
@RachelDraws
sorry for randomly tagging u, but, what do u think so far
(i dont mind if ur harsh)
04 May, 2025, 2:11 pm
@the_true_challenger
04 May, 2025, 3:56 pm
Wow! great start! :D i'm impressed!!
ok, here's what i think u can improve:
1) i noticed a coupleof typos in the comic's text.
I would recommend u put spacing between "dialogue" and "narration", this will make reading easier and all the text look organized :sparkles:
2) in the playback, i saw u colored everything by hand. That can be very time consuming.
I always duplicate multiple times the LineArt layer and use the FloodFill tool on the lower duplicated layers. This will speed up the process!
04 May, 2025, 3:57 pm
Hope it helped! ^^ Keep up the good work! :sparkles: