Thoughts? by Beargamer

Hi guys! Meet Fin! He is a main character to a book I am writing! (Ugh who knows if I'll be able to even finish) He is one of the three main characters in this series. "Tales of the Songweaver" I just did this as a doodle, but then I ended up liking it so much. (Also I'm bored :sweat_smile: sorry Fin)

Any thoughts or questions about him?
I will also be taking requests? Dtiys, ocs, and others!

Book summary in comments, but I did not include everything in there sooooo....

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29 Apr, 2025, 10:39 pm
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Clink08

30 Apr, 2025, 12:32 am

What's the book about??

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:54 am

M'kayyyy..

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:54 am

So the main character, Ella, lives in the kingdom of Crowne.

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:56 am

her father is one of the four nobles of the kingdom that help ensure the heir (the prince) is safe to become king when the current king dies

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:56 am

(thats important for later ig)

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:57 am

The story starts where she is going to the market to meet the new merchant

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:57 am

she finds a boy who introduces himself as the new merchant, Tom

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 12:58 am

he claims to have important news to share w/ her father, so they go to see him

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:00 am

she takes him to see her father, where Tom reveals that Ella is the 'Songweaver' (a hero who can use sound to their advantage but i still need to figure that out :smirk:)

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:01 am

her father is outraged by this and sends him out of their house. Ella is shaken inside bc no one knows about her ability to basically 'see ppls songs' Which reveals their intentions, emotions, and stuff

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:02 am

i feel like her abilities are smewhat based off of an Empaths from KOTLC ish

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:03 am

she is in her room when she finds a note in her pocket telling her to go to the Grove of Mysteries and then 'all will be revealed'

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:06 am

she obviously goes. :3

On her way, she spends a night in a canyon (cuz why not!) and is sneak attacked by rare creatures called rock spiders (so original ik) their bite consists of poison which slowly paralyzes the victim and the only known cure, glow moss, is as equally as rare, if not more

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:07 am

so ofc she gets bitten for plots' sake, then gets rescued by anothr random guy named Aaron

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:09 am

they tag team the long journey make it and are FINALLY at the Grove of Mysteries! There, they encounter a mercenary named Cody who (??) suspiciously looks A LOT like Tom!

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:11 am

Who reveals himself to be not only an alias known as Tom, But his real name isnt even Cody! (It's Fin)

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:15 am

he explains stuff, and then they figure out more stuff, go back to her house to find...
Her dad is crazy-cukoo-nutzy-bouncy-balls
He has a weird crown on his head and starts levitating stuff everywere. long story short, the break the crown, he's ok and turns out some random cloaked dude gave it to him, and the rest is fuzzy.

End of the book is where its a celebration!
Then a random cloaked dude goes to a pub, finds another cloaked dude, the main bad guy "The Hooded One" And says stuff like

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:15 am

"Its done." normal bad guy cliche

Beargamer

30 Apr, 2025, 1:17 am

@Clink08
Thats basically it, sorry for the long summary :sweat_smile: And i am not lying when i say i already have plots for book 2 and 3 and i also thought of all of this in the car in 30 minutes

Clink08

30 Apr, 2025, 1:23 am

@Beargamer That sounds so interesting!! And I can totally relate to coming up with full series plots in like 10 minutes. I came up with the sequels for my main book while I was swimming for like twelve minutes and tossing around these colorful pool toy rings (the second book's called The Eternity Rings; the rings are how I got my idea).
And btw, do I smell a love triangle in your book (I'm assuming the characters are teens or something)?

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