Good Tardis! :) Use a bigger pencil and a bit less 3D on the Tardis, some shading useing what ever pencil you want. It'd be awsome! :D

thanks i'm kinda new so i always trace and i can't do graphics it has to be cartoony

I was very bad at it too when I first started, but this is really good for your first few times! :) I'll watch your gallery for new stuff. Your good at this! (Repeat, repeat, repeat! xP)

Props to your attempt, my fellow Whovian.

Here's a tip though. Try to clean up your lines and use a small ruler on the screen. (I've done it before, it's not that difficult.)
Keep working at it!

thanks

i really like docktor who i watch all the episodes without the series 8