Woah... the one with the mask reminds me alot of T-elos from Xenosaga. Anyways on to the actual feedback, overall it looks great, I love the cartoony look, but uhh i have no idea what's going on! Are cop cars flying around because on explosion?? or do they normally look like they're flying around. I would also like to know who this mysterious white haired girl is. maybe you could make a comic series with them!
Well i was shooting for sumthin' like "we gadda speed around and do cool jumps and incircle her all goofey wacky style" thing lol. just sorta let it flow. as for the girl, i named her "Rider-X" for now. she's like a super-heroine, outlaw biker mix lol. but do you really think i could do a comic? that's by far the coolest comment i've gotten. thanks a lot for the feedback!
Oh yeah, if you can spare the time, you could def. turn this one picture into a whole super silly (or serious) comic series! The art style of the characters/world totally gives me the whole comic-y feel. If you want I could help with world building, character ideas,and dialogue. I'm taking a creative writing class and the extra practice would help alot!
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23 Oct, 2012, 11:32 pm
Thanks for the stars! my first 4-star art ;)
24 Oct, 2012, 3:25 pm
cool
24 Oct, 2012, 11:41 pm
Woah... the one with the mask reminds me alot of T-elos from Xenosaga. Anyways on to the actual feedback, overall it looks great, I love the cartoony look, but uhh i have no idea what's going on! Are cop cars flying around because on explosion?? or do they normally look like they're flying around. I would also like to know who this mysterious white haired girl is. maybe you could make a comic series with them!
25 Oct, 2012, 2:40 am
Well i was shooting for sumthin' like "we gadda speed around and do cool jumps and incircle her all goofey wacky style" thing lol. just sorta let it flow. as for the girl, i named her "Rider-X" for now. she's like a super-heroine, outlaw biker mix lol. but do you really think i could do a comic? that's by far the coolest comment i've gotten. thanks a lot for the feedback!
25 Oct, 2012, 3:38 pm
Most comic worthy indeed. amzing job. :p i would read it!
26 Oct, 2012, 12:34 am
Oh yeah, if you can spare the time, you could def. turn this one picture into a whole super silly (or serious) comic series! The art style of the characters/world totally gives me the whole comic-y feel. If you want I could help with world building, character ideas,and dialogue. I'm taking a creative writing class and the extra practice would help alot!
19 Dec, 2012, 5:29 pm
Good work! I lile the style that you used.