-the cat leans down and whispers into her ear-
???: "Oh Acornpelt, you shouldve just been my mate...your still as beautiful as ever,im doing you a favour! you and your kits will be togther with your mate in starclan! ill see you soon~"
-he licks her head and leaves-
-Lollykit keeps running and only then does she turn around and finds that she is alone, she starts going back and then her mother comes into view she runs up to her as she looks asleep then she feels that she infact is dead-

-Tears fill her eyes"
Lollykit: "M-mom? m-mom....? Acornpelt!!! a-a-acor-......anyone...?"
-she curls up with her one last time and heads off as she cant bare to see the horrific sight anymore she runs on hoping to stumble upon the camp, but she didnt know where it was infact she didnt know where anything was she just kept running wondering who that cat was? she didnt meet every cat and it smelled like fox dung
"they probably covered there scent" she thought-

-she had heard warriors say that when they walked past the nursery one time but the cat managed to jump right at the sun as well so she had no way of identifying it all she didnt even catch a glimpse of it who was that cat! thats not what matters right now all that matters is to go home she could smell cats near here but it was different she could also smell a different specie it was big, way bigger than her..-

oops in the second comment i meant their not there!

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I really like it

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the battle scene is written rly well :D

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