Hoshino Ai by Kurumiiii

@loidforger i tried lol
hopefully it looks decent

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painted on a Nintendo Switch
19 Jan, 2024, 11:28 pm
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loidforger

19 Jan, 2024, 11:38 pm

yes you did great thank you

loidforger

19 Jan, 2024, 11:39 pm

there is one more lineart i have made on my gallery if you want to try

m00nsh3ll

20 Jan, 2024, 2:00 am

great coloring

Mystheria

20 Jan, 2024, 5:37 am

So cute ????

MIMISAMA

20 Jan, 2024, 3:32 pm

女の子が心臓マッサージされてる絵を書いてください。「リアル」

ZfromN0RTH

20 Jan, 2024, 8:44 pm

:D

Autumn_Fall

22 Jan, 2024, 5:28 am

THIS IS SO CUTEE

Mewsea

24 Jan, 2024, 1:24 am

The eyes are the best part!

But I wonder how it would look if everything was just as detailed as the eyes... Maybe try adding more shading - particularly highlights - to the clothing and the hair... They look quite flat in comparison to the eyes.

Would also like to see more definition in the hair... It looks like one giant blob right now.

Sorry if you don't accept constructive criticism, but your tone sounded unsatisfied, so I thought I'd offer you my opinion.

Have a wonderful day! :)

Kurumiiii

24 Jan, 2024, 3:18 am

@Mewsea
Thank you so much!!
And No worries!!
I really like criticism, It really tells me how to improve,
So thank you for taking the time to write that!!

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