Sorry I didn't stay by razrdraws

Man, Wife, Son.
Moved, Left, Abandoned.
Couldn't, Keep, Talking.
Had, To, Go.

Trouble, Can't Escape.
Retreat, Back, Home.
Didn't, Make, It.

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Mother, Son.
Loss, Grievance.
Sorrow, Mourn.

Violent, End.
Violence, Ending.

Life, Taken.

Didn't, Stay.
I'm. Sorry.

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painted on a Nintendo Switch
18 Jan, 2024, 5:04 am
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razrdraws

18 Jan, 2024, 5:05 am

Testing writing styles.
Lemme know if th storytelling comes across rough or anything

cipherz

18 Jan, 2024, 6:54 am

yo wassup

razrdraws

19 Jan, 2024, 7:34 am

@cipherz Yoo!! been a while dawg how u been

cipherz

20 Jan, 2024, 6:03 am

@razrdraws its had its ups and downs, i guess.

chiisai_Hoshi

25 Jan, 2024, 12:24 am

Lemme tell you something- when my old man went to go get the horchata, I was crushed as hell. Mom was kinda like like: "damn- here we go with this shxt- smh" I'll tell you this I wasn't about to off myself because or get into some needless bad situation because of one selfish man and Mom been moved on. It's sad that this does this to some families though... your heart really goes out to them.

razrdraws

25 Jan, 2024, 10:17 pm

@chiisai_Hoshi I really appreciate this input, this is why I write poetry.

The meanings behind the writing inspire and unlock stories and memories; And that's my goal.

Thank you :heart_decoration:

Hailsss

28 Jan, 2024, 11:40 pm

reminds me of pink floid album covers :,) lools awesome

Hailsss

28 Jan, 2024, 11:40 pm

*looks* glagghgg

razrdraws

29 Jan, 2024, 4:57 am

@Hailsss abstract my beloved :heart_decoration:

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