Overlap by razrdraws
Sometimes the excess is thrown, and,
maybe it's the end?
But sometimes it leaves on it's own, and,
maybe it's the end?
But the excess doesn't know where to go, and,
it's got no money to spend.
So, back in it goes, and,
it makes a friend.
Through life they grow, and,
each other, they defend.
With allies and foes, and
maybe a girlfriend?
Then before you even know, man,
Here comes one, grows to ten.
And the excess took the blow, back then,
But alas,
It was not,
The End.
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11 Jan, 2024, 6:50 am
Hah, hope you all enjoy some of these lil free-verse poems I write, it's a lot of fun!
I guess that's the end goal, righy? ;)
11 Jan, 2024, 6:53 am
If you wanted to know my hidden meanings here, this is about the crossing of life's paths.
And an added bonus, it's a story of not giving up in life.
11 Jan, 2024, 7:56 am
Smashing performance :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
11 Jan, 2024, 8:25 am
Wow
11 Jan, 2024, 12:04 pm
Pretty cool man
12 Jan, 2024, 6:03 am
This drawing looks simple with a quick glance but if you look at the blending then it looks a MonoLisa
28 Jan, 2024, 11:45 pm
mannn when did you decide to pick up poetry?? These are pretty good, been going through and reading all of them :o
29 Jan, 2024, 4:56 am
@Hailsss LOL i just be writing
I explained a bit in the discord too
Basically, since the hidden messages in the recent art isnt really noticed, I've started to write the poetry to guide the viewer to them some more