@-Vero-
the twins but colored

Pretty!

Mark is almost a trap...

@-Vero-
wuh?

A trap is a term used for guys (in anime) who look like girls. A reverse trap is a girl that looks like a guy.

@-Vero-
oh i didnt know dat

Welp, now ya do.

@-Vero-
:thumbsup:

oooh i love the one's hair on the right!! it reminds me of one of the many stories for Anita - :heart: w :heart: -

AHH I LOVE YOUR ANIME STYLE SM!!!! XD XD XD

@MaggieSue327
Mark will always be forgotten-
rly?
i thought u were ganna say dark link. . . cuz dat's what she was designed after

@MarleesClone
im glad u live it
i have days where i absolutely hate it
it comes n goes

the one on the left's hair looks a lot like dark link for sure!! i don't see it in right tho

@MaggieSue327
cuz he was designed after Zelda
n their names r Mary n Mark

ah- it's always nice to have a little reminder that i'm not the only one basing most my characters off of loz characters ->w<-
oooo!! i like those names,

@MaggieSue327
well they werent based
they were loz ocs
i didnt want to change too much of them

*face gets hot and red*
shhh- we say ''based'' so the haters leave us alone O-O
*looks around in all directions for anyone else*

@MaggieSue327
idc bout haters

remember when i said my family kicks me out the room when play botw bc i can't help but give unwanted tips?? my siblings like to hate on the fact all my characters are practically hylians... ;-;

@MaggieSue327
then they dumb
my ocs were first called Hylians too till i came up w Muryans

@-Ames- i'm trying to come up with a name, but until then i don't refer to them by race

@MaggieSue327
well do they have a god?
whats the name of the land they live in?

@-Ames-
they do technically?? they refer to a divine person here and there, but most the time when they just talk to the sky, bc i haven't done much with the actually world more then the people,
and the land don't have a name either- i'm really bad at naming places- most the time i name towns and stuff off of objects- like chalk town,
;-;
it was called patria, but i realized that would make them patrians, and while it worked for a bit- i ended up using the name for a different place

'actual

@MaggieSue327
hmm i see
umm
meybe try to change one of ur names into the world
dats wut i did
continued

ah i see-- let me thhhink
i could use my middle name??
*just take off your example??

@MaggieSue327
yes just think

the name Nadia means the same thing??
Nadia-Nadiaaaaa

@MaggieSue327
im thinking im thinking

we could just put a N at the end and call them the Nadians lol

sounds ruff tho

@MaggieSue327
to me it sounds like no one in spanish
its so close to nadie TvT''

lol really??
heh- i just learned a new word!!
-^w^-
weeell- let's see, other nammes bc now i won't stop thinking that,

@MaggieSue327
ummmmmm
Magguens?
Maggians?
the land of Margaret
Margierets?
idk TvT

they all sound like maggots to me ;-;
i'm going to look up the meaning behind the name Margaret and then find a name with the same meaning

Margaret means pearl ;-;
popcorn... dang-
And apparently it's the only name...
I'll keep looking...

@MaggieSue327
okay

so we've crossed off Nadia, what about it's french counterpart 'Nadine' ? the people could be 'the Nadine people' ??
it doesn't sound much like nadie,

@MaggieSue327
The Nadine ppl
sounds good
divine is the first thing dat came to mind
how many races to u have?

uuhhhg- idk
i think only 1 or 2 ;-;
i don't work on the actual world enough..

idk it's two if you count hoomans...

'humans
what. just. happened.

@MaggieSue327
i call humans hoomans
ik wut u meant
well i have............... a ton
uh
Muryans
Mikans
Chikarans
Hikarans
Morikans
Skylingers
Dakus
Monsters
Halflings (originally Vero's)
n Humans
idk if gods or demigods count .-.
ppl dat use magic r fairies (originallys Vero's name for his ppl, hey, our worlds r conncted so i can use them too)
n ppl dat dont use em r humans
but since now theres another world..
it means theres ganna be more races-
y am i so creative?
idk if its a gift or a curse

it's a love-hate relationship being a writer

i see, any tips for coming up with races??bc i want to make more bc my story's kinda boring, but i've never done it before

@MaggieSue327
ummm
if it sounds good enough than use them
i didnt want the kingdoms to actually be named after each god but i stuck w em cuz i couldnt come up w anything better
n design their big major traits
for example:
Mikans live in snowy kingdom, n the land is named after Miku cuz the ppl there mostly look like her
they have either white hair, a light shade of cold colors
or dark blue, dark purple (her har color), black hair
they also use psychic, ice, or water magic

dats what makes a Mikan a Mikan

i see,
so you base them off their respected god/goddesses which fit with the region they're from??
kinda like botw/totk/oot/ss/LOZ IN GENERAL

@MaggieSue327
yes-
another happy accident
but dat is on the main land
Skylingers r ppl dat live in the sky
none of the gods r actually sky based
but it is the dimension Hikaru watches over
so they mostly look like her
Chikarans dont look lik Chikara
Hikarans look more like Chikara
the red hair is dominant in Hikarans
So Rudy, he's considered a Hikaran
not Chikaran
Daichi, any orange or orange brown hair fairies, r considered Chikarans

WUT.
''i am conFUSION''

@MaggieSue327
im sorry TvT'
wut r u confused about exactly?

oh nvm i read it wrong lol

i read it as- ''chikarans don't LIKE chikara''
-w-'

@MaggieSue327
i messed a few things up
hold on

okaii, i wait- patiently.....

@MaggieSue327
i just remembered out of my tired brain
red hair n yellow eyes r considered Chikaran
n some Chikarans like living in Hikaru dats y i messed up dat all red hairs r actually Hikarans
but no
if u have red hair n YELLOW eyes
u r Chikaran
but red hair n a different color eye
u r Hikaran
im so tired TvT

it sounds quite complexed,
but it could bring you to some interesting incounters, like someone messing up the races- calling one the other

be sure to get good sleep tonight

@MaggieSue327
its the same w Morikans, Muryans, n Skylingers
some Morikans r blonde, or sandy blonde
they can be confused as a Muryan
Shin n Adrian r Muryan
they r blonde
Mark is Muryan
he blonde
Oren is Morikan
he has a brown light blonde
Eric is Morikan
he has a light blonde
Sora is a Skylinger-...yes Sora
he has light blonde too
Rickley is Hikaran
he has sandy blonde
but fairies dont rly care
they dont get offended like humans do

ah- i see,
i love having inside info to help me better navigate your world -^w^-

@MaggieSue327
im trying m best to organize everything
but im not dat good TvT
of ur ever confused or wondering about anything just ask
my world is big
it gets bigger by the day

yes, i shall ask if i ever need help understanding something!!
-^w^-

@MaggieSue327
yesh
now i bet u have no questions at all

@-Ames- they'll come lol
-^w^-
theeey'll coome-

so how does the concept of Goods and magic work in your world??

@MaggieSue327
ooh
Magic is gift from Murya
she can easily take it away from u
So, kids growig up had to learn how to use their magic
test help them figure wha typer they,r
just cuz ur a blondie dont mean u have light magic
u could have wind, sand, light, or even be elemental
it varies
Fairies r the only ppl dat have magic
n were for a long time
till Zero cause a unbalanced between the good n the bad
ppl were becoming wicked n use their magic for evil things
n cuz of dat Murya curse thos-

those ppl n turned them human
an 'eternal' punishment
if ur wicked
u may lose ur magic
if ur good, u may keep it
if a human is good in heart, they may learn SOME magic
but not have it back entirely
their descendants will become halflings (halfs human ha:f fairy)

oh i see!! so it's kinda like getting her blessing!!
do they get their powers at teen/adulthood or at birth/childhood??

she's got a lot of power, i see why she symbolizes Jesus/God that's cool

@MaggieSue327
they r born w the ability to learn it
it varies on what age u may learn it or be god at it
Daegen
took him to his preteens to learn magic
Easter
he was good at it from the beginning, he got stronger n stronger as he grew
Mackena
she learned her magic when she was 17
Daegen taught her
Shin
he was good as a kid, mastered it as a teen
Adrian
wasnt good at first, Shin had to teach him to get better

@MaggieSue327
she resembles God
Riley Jesus

ah i see,
that's very cool!! -^w^- so she could technically give anyone powers??

@MaggieSue327
yes anyone
but its up to them wether they would learn it
n to use it for good n bad
yk she's almighty n holy
u might be wondering y not just easily take away Chikara's power n stop the madness
or stop Zero from falling inlove w one of her bloodlines
or stop the humans from tormenting the fairies
it all has its meaning
she wants ppl to see what her ppl can do
like turn an assassin to a missionary
have a weak boy turn into a great knight
only because they searched n asked for her

OH!! kinda like- heh GOD
i seeee-
i love the little details that have been left to find by the fans!!

@MaggieSue327
fans?
i have like.....2 fans
cant believe i have fans ovo'
it has to happen
for Zero he had to, he's evil but for 1 reason, he's suppose to control the evil darkness n fix the unbalancing he cause
but he needed a break
he needed someone to lean on cuz he is a person
he has feelings

you do!! -^w^- i'm one of the first!!
you'll have more once you start making the direct story more public

aww- poor boi,
''everyone needs some'' -guess

but at the same time, not??

what made him become evil??

@MaggieSue327
he needs some milk!
Chikar took all of his evil n dark energy n made it into a person, Zero
but Riley had to actually give Zero an awareness, a conscious,
for the first time he felt alive
n he immediately broke down into pieces not understanding wth is going on or wut he did

so- the entire time he was 'evil', he wasn't aware of his actions?

@MaggieSue327
yep
yk how kids just do whatever they want to do but nt actually realize what they're doing?
dats how he was for awhile
till he was forced to mature up
n pay the consequences for his actions
which werent getting fix by him laying on the floor whishing to die
yeah
he did dat for a loooong time
made things worse

yeah, they mostly won't realize it was wrong until they are told, or when they reach a particular age,
so, what was the original intention for making Zero?

@MaggieSue327
to free Chikara from dat role
being the one causing all the bad
Chikara had thigs to fix w his family, he had to get comfortable living in heaven again
getting used to being loved n forgiven by the ones he hurt
he was given a 2nd chance

so it was a ''dump all my problems of another person'' kinda situation??

@MaggieSue327
no
dump my evil thing on another person
he gave him the role
the job
the power
not the problems
Zero cuased problems
Chikara, surprisingly, never cuased an unbalanced beween the good n the bad
he just wanted to hurt Murya, take away her bloodline for taking his wife n kids away
he didnt realize it was his punishment
n she had mercy n heart w him
she did let him keep Jr. after all

ah i see-

losing your hole family... that is definitely enough to make someone absolutely break down..

@MaggieSue327
he lost it when they took Jr. from him
he tried to pull the moon down to crash into the fairy lands
after dat he didnt want nothing but his kids back
so he returned home
after centuries he was allowed back into heaven
n surprisingly, w many arms wide open to welcome him back home

most people would probably act the (just abt) the same way,
he must've been shattered- i feel kinda bad

@MaggieSue327
i couldnt toture him for so long
i had to make him go back home
to reunite w ppl dat he thought hated him, but actually loved n missed him dearly

that's a sweet ending, and after what he's been throw, he deserves it 100&

'%

@-Howl-
Yes
u can see y i forget Mark alot....he's not rly close to Zero
he's closer to his mom who he resembles

@-Howl-
he was designed after her

@_-FoxishLily-_
dis is Zero's twins

@_-FoxishLily-_
i knew u wouldnt be able to guess which is whic
Mary is the white hair
n Mark is the blondie
mark looks like a girl
n mary like a boy
done on purpose so dat ppl will see thm fairies r chikk n wont get upset over a lil misgendering (which ppl will kiII u nowadays if u do)

@ThyFoxyLily
one by dark link
another by zelda

i def see the zelda in em.