Henry Finished by E1357

I'm happy the way it turned out, but all critiques are welcome to help me on the next one.
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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
20 Dec, 2023, 11:53 pm
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The_Adjudicator

22 Dec, 2023, 8:05 am

Looks cool! : ) If there was any critique I'd add, it would be to make all the light reflecting off the dragon come from the flame alone, and to make the light have a more orange tint. But that would be in conflict with your artistic vision to put focus on the flame itself.
Perhaps the next thought would be to refine the flame itself. It seems to be coming out as a concentrated beam. Maybe a subtle red bloom effect around the flame would make it seem to burn hotter.

The_Adjudicator

22 Dec, 2023, 8:07 am

(second opinion)
Now that I've looked closer at the flame beam, there already is a subtle red bloom effect on it. : )

E1357

24 Dec, 2023, 4:38 am

@The_Adjudicator
Thanks for the advice. I thought about doing an orange lighting like you suggested, but in the end didn't do it. Maybe next time. ; )

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