Does it look like hes looking back? by AtomicNomic

working on my poses
tho seriously answer the question :)
open for any other constructive criticisms!

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painted on a Nintendo Switch
26 Oct, 2023, 6:43 pm
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-skull-

26 Oct, 2023, 10:49 pm

Not really, it looks like hes thinking

Maybe make the eyes more to the side and put something in the background?

AtomicNomic

27 Oct, 2023, 8:03 am

@-skull- Thanks for the tip! :D

Mewsea

28 Oct, 2023, 2:54 am

The problem is the anatomy. I think you were trying to make him look like he's looking over his shoulder, but instead he looks like he's facing you with an awkwardly raised arm...

A person's back is structured very differently than their front. It's harder to describe it in words, but if you take a look at the human skeleton, you'll notice the spine curves out around the shoulder blades and dips in around the abdominal area in an almost S-like shape. Keep this in mind whem drawing a person's back.

In this sense, a person's muscle and flesh should follow the shape of their spinal chord.

AtomicNomic

28 Oct, 2023, 8:31 am

@Mewsea woah thank you for the tip!!

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