okay um what do you want to focus on

cause what I suggest here is that yor lineart should be consistent it needs to stay the same
your colors shoulg go well togther and you should use more dyamic poses and try different styles to find a style you are chill with

@Honey_Stars hmmmmmm.....ok!

maybe use a diffrent brush for face

@KirbyFan wtym?

wdym*

use like classic hard or skech instead of soft for the face

@KirbyFan i dont use soft ever i always use sketch or select fill.!

fill.*

same, check my page and that should explain everyting :/

*everything

Try adding more shadow then light on the hair, Unless you located the light source of the drawing