Oh yikes
Is he d.ying? o-o

Great job tho

@Heroine-of-Winds
yes
oop forgot one special tag

@Heroine-of-Winds
he's from the boy without a shadow
i made a song for this scene n for his funeral its call "To My Brother Alfonso"
@-Vero- helped me w the story, tysm *gives u 100 kit kats*

@Heroine-of-Winds
dying aint censored

Yup, just kilIing.
I guess it's too violent.

Whoo! Kit-kats!
If you ever need more help/suggestions, let me know. I'll be willing to help.

@-Vero-
i need help w the. . . 1....2.. yes the 3rd story
le pirate story *puts on captain hat*

Okay. Just give me the details & what you're struggling with whenever you're ready, and I'll do my best!

@-Vero-
i have nothing but corina doesnt know that she's a princess n her "fathers" crew doesnt know shes a girl

thats it.
thats all i have.

First thing you need, is the conflict of the story.
What do they want, and why can't they have it?

@-Vero-
okay
her "father" wants to return her to her kingdom but is afraid he will get thrown into jail for "kidnapping" n fr being a pirate
uh a traveler runs into the crew n says he's searching for the princess but no one believes there was a princess in da first place
n something happens to the "father"(which idk what yet) that makes corina captain n starts to search for him

So, 'side dude' (once / if he figures out) wants Corina to go back to being a princess, as does 'dad' but she refuses because she wants to find dad.
Is this right?

Also who's the 'main' character? Who's eyes is the story seen through? -Because their conflict is the most important.

@MaggieSue327
hylia i talk way to much to vero-
heres alfy
he got a HUGE makeover tho
he dont look like dat

ooooh- oh i likee him -Ò^Ó-
kinda sad- can't image what his bro was feeling at this point

@MaggieSue327
actually he's dead here
he gave his crown to alan n told him to leave as he took his final breaths, he died w a sad smile too
so alan left him to save the day

n alan had mixed up emotions
after the battle he felt alone
more than ever
but he wasnt totally alone
alfy was trying to get back from the after life
literally begging the upper goddess to bring him back
he's not suppose to feel pain in heaven
so she did bring him back to finally spend time w his brother

oh-
uh-
wow, that's REALLY sad
-TwT- wow

@MaggieSue327
yeah
alfy was always a favorite
but alan wasnt because he doesnt have a light (a shadow made of light)
n since dats so abnormal
they separate the two for yrs
causing the love for eachother to grow even more
alan is capable of thing alfy isnt
everyine thnks as alfy as a leader, a good student, n one day he'll become a great king
believe it or not
he's TERRIFIED of ruling a kingdom
its too much pressure

i bet ruling a kingdom is crazy hard-
royalty is just a hole nother breed