Depth: Act 1 Scene 2 by ThunderFox

Alright, im too lazy. so ill add a scene every week either on tuesday or saturday. so. yup ^^ long way to the end

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
29 Sep, 2012, 2:08 pm
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ThunderFox

29 Sep, 2012, 4:10 pm

nobody else does....

wolfsoulwill

29 Sep, 2012, 5:48 pm

aww it has a cute ending. awesome work.

ThunderFox

29 Sep, 2012, 6:17 pm

pfft... its not the ending. its just the start

jackinthebox777

29 Sep, 2012, 10:51 pm

nice job cant wait till you add more

Errorz

30 Sep, 2012, 1:41 am

Not bad, but I'll tell you why this comic may not be as popular as you would have hoped. On colors, a majority of comics are skipped over unless they have a ton of detail. It's hard to do that on colors when doing small panels on comics. Also, people are looking for quick stories, ones that get finished in about a week or so. I'm not saying to stop, but I suggest doing bigger story comics somewhere other than colors. For me, I think if I ever did a comic, I'd probably upload short comics with my characters on colors, but for a full story do something more official on a website when I get a drawing tablet sometime soon. For now I keep my ideas in a sketchbook. That's not critisism for your comic, just some ideas in general for what to do with comicd. If I could say one thing about you comic that you should change thoug, is to avoid any kind of description of actions, such as "walks away" or "walks over". Try to avoid that at all cosrs with comics, always show it with actions instead.

ThunderFox

30 Sep, 2012, 9:31 pm

excuse me. im not going to take any comments that arent postive. i dont need pointers, thank you.

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