My Pride, my Poison by KiraFaye04

Afraid to act, ashamed to share
The Weakness inside,
I bury it under my Pride,
Under my Poison.
I stay in the Shadows,
Afraid of the Light that will reveal
My Truth.
They swallow me, fading my Existence,
Until there is nothing left
But my Pride,
But my Poison.
#SundayPoem

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19 Mar, 2023, 5:33 pm
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KiraFaye04

19 Mar, 2023, 5:36 pm

@TheDeputySheriff I've never publicly shared my poetry before, so I'm really nervous, but here is my first attempt for #sundaypoem. I hope it isn't too bad lol!

Ak4meShir0

19 Mar, 2023, 6:08 pm

really good poem

Ninja-GX

19 Mar, 2023, 7:43 pm

I'd like to say thankyou for all the comments and likes I'm working on a tribal with your artist name in it. Because to be honest you have supported my page more than anyone else I would like to keep that support very much. It might take a couple weeks to finish it but I'll put a comment with your tag so u hopefully get a notification when I post it.

Ninja-GX

19 Mar, 2023, 7:45 pm

Thank you for sticking with me even though I don't comment very often you are appreciated very much

TheDeputySheriff

20 Mar, 2023, 12:23 am

I love it! This is fantastic i'm so glad you shared! I hope we get to see more soon :D

WolfInTheRain

20 Mar, 2023, 1:37 am

Reply: You're fine! Sorry, I don't get on a terrible lot to respond.
If I'm giving advice, I suggest watching playbacks of artists you like

Ninja-GX

22 Mar, 2023, 12:39 am

I'm doing alot better thankyou how are you doing

tall73

07 May, 2023, 2:58 am

Oh interesting, I didn't even know there was a poetry movement here. Thank you for sharing.

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