Glow Bright like a Flower by TheDeputySheriff

no matter how far we run
a web will be spun
one that wont be escaped
of fear and mistakes
no matter how hard we cry
or wish we could die
the pain and regret we'll never forget
the rain burns like fire
our only desire is to burn out whats stained
the ones we have pained
in a field of despair
the people who care
glow bright like a flower
it fills us with power
#sundaypoem

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
18 Mar, 2023, 5:42 am
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TheDeputySheriff

18 Mar, 2023, 5:45 am

at first they wont listen
but dont fail to mention
they may be confused
why youve been abused
the trauma and fear
can pierce deep like a spear
but you will be alright
let your flower shine bright
no one can control us
or fill us with mistrust
you must take your stand
and live out your plan

DT_and_FB

18 Mar, 2023, 5:55 am

dang... nice drawing tho

TheDeputySheriff

18 Mar, 2023, 5:58 am

grab your shield hold it steady
make sure you are ready
for what lies ahead
the things that you dread
and once its all over
the fields filled with clovers
will be burned again
but now you have friends
The things you were scared of
you now stand high above
you will not retreat
do not fear defeat

KiraFaye04

19 Mar, 2023, 2:11 am

This poem is so beautiful and moving!

KiraFaye04

19 Mar, 2023, 2:12 am

My poetry is kinda stinky, but would it be okay if I tried to make my own Sunday poems every now and then?

TheDeputySheriff

19 Mar, 2023, 3:22 am

@KiraFaye04 That would be awesome! i'd love to see your poems! It will be great to see people taking part in the Sunday Poem tag again!

KiraFaye04

19 Mar, 2023, 5:37 pm

Ok, thank you! I'm a little nervous, but I just posted my first one!

Marlee9910

29 Mar, 2023, 2:23 am

OMG how are you that good at poems

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