this is good but the blue pencil doesnt line up with itsself. if you check the sides of the blue pencil on the left and right side of that big orange thing, they dont match; make sure to make and keep your lines straight. thats all the mistakes i can see at a glance. i would know. im in the best art school in the world... literally
Trint5: I know that a pencil is suposed to be structured under a straight line, and if you watch the replay you can see that i tried to follow that rule.
however, this is not a pencil, its a painting!
also, you don't have to be at an arts school(wolrd better or not) to know that a pencil is a straight line.. you only have to be a normal person with a normal functioning brain. ( so why even mention that?)
This looks Awesome! Great work, Andre! YEs, it is a painting and a work done on a DS.. which makes it pretty difficult to line up straight objects sometimes becasue of the small screen!
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09 Jan, 2011, 4:24 am
this is good but the blue pencil doesnt line up with itsself. if you check the sides of the blue pencil on the left and right side of that big orange thing, they dont match; make sure to make and keep your lines straight. thats all the mistakes i can see at a glance. i would know. im in the best art school in the world... literally
09 Jan, 2011, 11:18 pm
Trint5: I know that a pencil is suposed to be structured under a straight line, and if you watch the replay you can see that i tried to follow that rule.
however, this is not a pencil, its a painting!
also, you don't have to be at an arts school(wolrd better or not) to know that a pencil is a straight line.. you only have to be a normal person with a normal functioning brain. ( so why even mention that?)
10 Jan, 2011, 3:13 am
This looks Awesome! Great work, Andre! YEs, it is a painting and a work done on a DS.. which makes it pretty difficult to line up straight objects sometimes becasue of the small screen!
10 Jan, 2011, 3:17 am
BTW, I like the way you've softened the shadow as it gets further away from the base of the orange pencil sharpener, and red pencil tip, too!
11 Jan, 2011, 5:25 pm
Love how the red pencil is fighting with the orange capsule. Does it have a little toy inside?
14 Jan, 2011, 3:13 pm
Very nicely done light and shadows perfectly catched.
15 Jan, 2011, 10:08 pm
amazing it seams like a photo Oo