i didnt intend to clean this up as much as i did but here we are anyway two hours later lmao

the time kinda just goes sometimes lol
i needa peak in on yall more often, i am missing good characters

@Invalidation
That makes it sound like you're gonna peak over a fence and spray us with a gardener hose.

@Elininjakat
Man this looks pretty damn good! There's a few small gripes I have with it, small but very fixable and don't take away too much from the drawing. I don't wanna say them without you being okay with it first.

Just some knowledge on this character, I won't say as she's coming up very soon in a rp:
She is a Viridan, apart of the same species as Gaya ( #GayaWakana please). For other backstory things I can't say right now other than she will be an antagonist. Characteristics however...this "kind" lady stands at whopping 6' 3" (same as Bane if you know him) and she's quite well built, you'd be able to see such if she wasn't wearing her hipster like dress lmao

@invalidation
geisyuku is the kind of character you will love to hate

@grumpybritishperson
im glad u like it!!! and Yea gimme the critique, even if its just kinda nitpicks its fine since i like to remember things to fix for next time

@Elininjakat
Here are a few what I've noticed:

- the eyebrows. The eyebrows are pointed in a way that kinda go antagonist the flow of the expression and change the face she's making. Tilting the eyebrows more down makes her more snarky and aggressive rather than her thinking about her crush which is what I think is what you were trying to do, tilting the eyebrows upwards would actually fix this and I even saw you do this in the first few seconds of the replay.

- the colour of the skin/blush. The reason I don't think the blush work is because you made her skin too green to what it's supposed to be. Green and red don't really complement eachother which is why I use greens with more blue to them, it makes the blush stand out more and makes any red in general stand out more because it's blue. I'll send over a palette for you, but for now think, think more mint greens then yellow greens.

- highlights. This is just a sketch with colours so you haven't finished rendering it yet but I think adding little white highlights will make her feel more lively

Sorry if this seems too critical. I love the piece otherwise and I think if you fixed these small issues, it'd be perfect!

Take care, love you!!!

@grumpybritishperson
eehhhh maybe i'll fix it sometime? if i do i'll prolly just do it on my computer since i dont rlly feel too much like changing it rn lol
i honestly was flipflopping on what to do with the eyebrows so yea dgdhshdd
i dont rlly like adding highlights a lot but? maybe ill give it a try
thank u for the critique!!!

@Elininjakat
How about we talk a little about this tomorrow on discord? It'd just make things easier and plus we wouldn't be as tired.

I actually take back what I said about the eyebrows, they're alright. I guess I was just tired lol