Decayed World by SoupiBuddi

The Good Queen is good.
When it was broken, she hand painted the world back together.
She painted the people new.
She didn't forget the ones who died.
She made an even better world than the last.
She forgave me, even, and painted me new too.

But something is wrong.

I hear her screams in the decayed world.
I see her head, looking at me with such scorn.
Scrolling, scrolling, scrolling, I see the hatred she painted on the walls of reality.

But she urges me to go forward,
and wears a happy face.

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painted on a Nintendo Switch
25 Jun, 2022, 3:31 am
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AnArtistNamedStar

25 Jun, 2022, 3:34 am

Love the poertry.
it really makes for an interesting rezd,
i widh I could emphasise how much I liked your stuff but its hardm you revive my

Ender1872

25 Jun, 2022, 3:49 am

conti ue it im the comments bevausr i also really love this and woyld like to see more

SoupiBuddi

25 Jun, 2022, 3:53 am

@ender1872
thamk yoy
itls 4 in the morbin time

AnArtistNamedStar

25 Jun, 2022, 3:57 am

4 in the morbius tim3
EVERY TIME IS FOR FREDDY FAZBEAR PICKLE PIZZA

Ender1872

25 Jun, 2022, 4:09 am

no shut up were watching roli und rita

AnArtistNamedStar

25 Jun, 2022, 4:29 am

Sorry i was busy looking at epic fury tiger

SoupiBuddi

25 Jun, 2022, 5:53 am

@HammerdStardust @Ender1872
Sorry I deleted most of the comments, after socialising I feel bad sometimes and I want to forget because I overthink and go over what I said wrong, I can't reread it if it's gone.

Ender1872

25 Jun, 2022, 10:33 am

oh dw about it
i personally thought it was super fun but yeah i understand that

AnArtistNamedStar

25 Jun, 2022, 2:12 pm

Its ok

AnArtistNamedStar

25 Jun, 2022, 2:15 pm

From what I remember last night, I think you were asking if your game was good or not.

I think your game is pretty amzing, and this doubt is just a part of being an artist really.

SoupiBuddi

25 Jun, 2022, 3:14 pm

@Ender1872 Same but I overthink and stuff

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