ik u want art criticism but asking us isn't likely gonna work bc we're all biased and love you and your art SO idk i could ask random people on discord if you want bc like ur not gonna get actual criticism from your friends most likely
alr jasp the people of discord have spoken- -- Kinda hard to give certain criticism since the artsyle fluctuates and I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. But some critique I would give is study some more anatomy, specifically the head and hands The pic I like the most is the all blue with the girl in it (your contest entry) because the shading makes sense, isn't overly textured and doesn't leave the character looking flat and the hair doesn't have unnecessary lines except when it's needed. And even tho the hands on the pic look out of proportion it still manages to look good even if it was intentional or not. Take what I said with a grain of salt tho, and good luck!
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21 Jun, 2022, 10:27 pm
OMG I LOVE IT
21 Jun, 2022, 10:28 pm
ITS AWESOME I LOVE IT TY ILYSM
21 Jun, 2022, 10:36 pm
@EchoHere GLAD U LIKE IT I JUST GOT A WAVE OF INSPO WHEN I SAW UR DRAWING IDK
22 Jun, 2022, 1:17 am
this is SOOOOOOOOOOOO good
08 Jul, 2022, 6:18 pm
oi jasp, my favorite himbo
ik u want art criticism but asking us isn't likely gonna work bc we're all biased and love you and your art
SO
idk i could ask random people on discord if you want bc like
ur not gonna get actual criticism from your friends most likely
@twink @twink @jaspers_monologue
08 Jul, 2022, 6:50 pm
@EchoHere LMAO IK I WISH PEOPLE HATED ME SO I COULD GET MORE HELP HGHHHHAH
but i mean if u want i dont mind !! i need mean ppl
08 Jul, 2022, 6:51 pm
alr cool, ill do it later lol
11 Jul, 2022, 4:48 pm
alr jasp the people of discord have spoken-
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Kinda hard to give certain criticism since the artsyle fluctuates and I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. But some critique I would give is study some more anatomy, specifically the head and hands
The pic I like the most is the all blue with the girl in it (your contest entry) because the shading makes sense, isn't overly textured and doesn't leave the character looking flat and the hair doesn't have unnecessary lines except when it's needed. And even tho the hands on the pic look out of proportion it still manages to look good even if it was intentional or not.
Take what I said with a grain of salt tho, and good luck!