maybe badru takes caelum to the moon elf kingdom gives him to the king and then feels bad about it. he then steals caelum back risking his job for him?
@Unaone oh yes! that sounds good!! because badru growing up he had no parents so the king raised him to be an assassin. hes a father figure to badru but badru always felt alone so thats why he went back for caelus
Yeah and then maybe pretends not to care (and maybe doesn't at first and tells them they owe him?) but we should probably wait for Nekko to discuss this part :,P
@Unaone since we are just making it how about we start off as our own and then once were all comfortable with making the comics we can try the Frankenstein style :0
I'm just mentioning that we should think of an ending and actual story (since that assassination mishap whatsit is kind of just a startup) since stories can become mediocre if we don't think far ahead enough
But we have like the first chapter written kinda so I guess we'll be okay
@Unaone true and your right we still dont really know the main conflict besides the moon elves going after badru and caelus i definitely want the humans to play a part in this story maybe they go their after they meet nekkos oc to hide? maybe humans hate elves for "keeping magic to themselves" or something
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05 May, 2022, 11:02 pm
OOOO
06 May, 2022, 2:07 pm
@MeganekkoSama11 tseng is from final fantasy 7! :D
06 May, 2022, 4:12 pm
OOOOOO
06 May, 2022, 7:54 pm
nice
14 Aug, 2022, 1:04 am
Lol, everyone's just sying oooo
05 Aug, 2023, 10:54 pm
@Unaone i shall summon una here because people will read the chat on the other painting lol
05 Aug, 2023, 10:55 pm
Gotcha
05 Aug, 2023, 10:58 pm
@Unaone so if you want you can just write some lore here from your kingdom
05 Aug, 2023, 10:58 pm
So...
Talk about the other kingdoms?
05 Aug, 2023, 10:58 pm
Okidoki
*pulls out the map*
05 Aug, 2023, 10:59 pm
@Unaone yup u,u!!
05 Aug, 2023, 11:05 pm
Okay so maybe the Water Kingdom could be a bit like Atlantis but above water
Also maybe the elves from each kingdom have their own distinct physical traits?
Like some of the Air Elves have wings, the Sun Elves probably have tails, stuff like that
idk what the Moon Elves could be though, since I gave the Air Elves markings/tattoos
05 Aug, 2023, 11:07 pm
@Unaone i think for moon elves white hair and purple horns all of them will have it
05 Aug, 2023, 11:08 pm
@Unaone maybe water elves have lik fins? to help them swim in the water
05 Aug, 2023, 11:09 pm
Ooh okay
Maybe all of the Earth Elves have branches for horns or something like that
Then the Water Elves could have gills or webbed fingers?
Or funky fin things on their wrists and ankles
05 Aug, 2023, 11:10 pm
@Unaone yes i love the earth elf one!! kinda cute qwq!!
05 Aug, 2023, 11:15 pm
Well they're human
Remember when I said I liked urban fantasy? Maybe the humans are developed at a point similar to us, while the elves are doing their elfy thing? idk
05 Aug, 2023, 11:16 pm
@Unaone like they got machines and stuff?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:17 pm
Hm, yeah?
And cellphones maybe???
05 Aug, 2023, 11:17 pm
@Unaone oh and bout the marking on the wind elves do all of them have it or only the royalty
05 Aug, 2023, 11:18 pm
@Unaone ooo ok! so we still keeping that the humans can use magic for sacrifice? maybe one of them could be a villain?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:19 pm
They all have that wing-shaped marking somewhere but for all of Caelus's family they have it on their right hand
He doesn't like the look of his so he wears a glove
05 Aug, 2023, 11:19 pm
The sacrifice stuff seems fine
And yesss more villains
05 Aug, 2023, 11:20 pm
@Unaone oh ok!
05 Aug, 2023, 11:20 pm
@Unaone yes the evils people >:0!! so when badru takes caelum how do they bond?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:21 pm
maybe badru takes caelum to the moon elf kingdom gives him to the king and then feels bad about it. he then steals caelum back risking his job for him?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:25 pm
He's like
A con artist by accident so maybe he tricks whoever's watching him somehow?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:25 pm
@Unaone sorry :sob:
05 Aug, 2023, 11:26 pm
@Unaone so he tricks whoevers watching him in the moon kingdom?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:26 pm
He's probably kinda chatty so maybe once Badru gets rid of him he'll miss his company?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:28 pm
@Unaone oh yes! that sounds good!! because badru growing up he had no parents so the king raised him to be an assassin. hes a father figure to badru but badru always felt alone so thats why he went back for caelus
05 Aug, 2023, 11:32 pm
Ooh that'd work
And Caelus was kind of always ignored by his siblings so maybe he could see Badru as a big brother or something
05 Aug, 2023, 11:34 pm
@Unaone omg yes! look at us making a story >:D!!!
05 Aug, 2023, 11:34 pm
@Unaone badru was probably quite attached to caelus he risked it all to help him. but where do they go after?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:37 pm
The Sun Kingdom where they meet Kiahi?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:39 pm
@Unaone true but for what reason?
05 Aug, 2023, 11:40 pm
Maybe the king found out about Badru taking Caelus back and the Sun Kingdom was the closest place to run
05 Aug, 2023, 11:44 pm
@Unaone oh true! and maybe they were passing the desert and the heat was to intense they pass out and nekkos oc finds them
05 Aug, 2023, 11:52 pm
Yeah and then maybe pretends not to care (and maybe doesn't at first and tells them they owe him?) but we should probably wait for Nekko to discuss this part :,P
05 Aug, 2023, 11:53 pm
@Unaone yeah! where nekko when we need her :'0!! also im making the first pannel want me to post it on simp squad?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:07 am
It looks really good so far also I left a note there I don't wanna type it all out again lol
Also, any idea which sibling he's after?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:08 am
@Unaone no clue maybe the oldest?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:08 am
its up to you really
06 Aug, 2023, 12:09 am
Hm, yeah, maybe she's having a conversation with Caelus about responsibility and Badru comes in or whatever
06 Aug, 2023, 12:10 am
@Unaone oo alright!
06 Aug, 2023, 12:12 am
@Unaone also for the posting maybe each of us could do 3 pages a week? i post 3 in atleast a week then you then nekko?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:15 am
Yeah, we could try that :D
Would we each make our own or Frankenstein or styles?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:18 am
@Unaone since we are just making it how about we start off as our own and then once were all comfortable with making the comics we can try the Frankenstein style :0
06 Aug, 2023, 12:19 am
Okie-dokie
We should probably discuss how the dialogue works out though like through roleplaying or something
06 Aug, 2023, 12:22 am
@Unaone yeah i agree! i was wondering how we were gonna come up with a script lol!!
06 Aug, 2023, 12:27 am
I read once about roleplaying it and I was like
Yeah
That's a good idea
But since it's just your characters atm we don't need to yet
06 Aug, 2023, 12:30 am
@Unaone mhm! i finished page 1 sketch so after i finish it ill start working on 2 illpost all three by monday or Wednesday!!
06 Aug, 2023, 12:34 am
Yaaay :D
I'll probably just post one a day when I do my three because :sparkles:content variety:sparkles:
06 Aug, 2023, 12:35 am
Also could you put the other WIPs in the collab when you do them so I'll know what direction to go in?
06 Aug, 2023, 12:41 am
@Unaone oh yeah ofc :D!!
06 Aug, 2023, 12:48 am
*opens door violently*
I AM HERE!
06 Aug, 2023, 12:49 am
@Meganekko_ NEKKO
06 Aug, 2023, 12:50 am
@Meganekko_ NEKKO YOU GOTTA READ SME OF THE CHATS ARE DELETED SO ASK UNA TO TELL YOU THE TRAITS OF THE DIFFERENT ELVES @Unaone
06 Aug, 2023, 2:27 am
Yo one more thing we'll probably need an idea of how the story ends because they can't just be on the run or whatever forever
06 Aug, 2023, 3:12 am
@Unaone true but we can always figure out later since we just started
06 Aug, 2023, 3:16 am
Gonna do this like JJBA's writer then
I'll say the thing we should NOT do is end it with "it was all a dream" lol
06 Aug, 2023, 3:19 am
I'm just mentioning that we should think of an ending and actual story (since that assassination mishap whatsit is kind of just a startup) since stories can become mediocre if we don't think far ahead enough
But we have like the first chapter written kinda so I guess we'll be okay
06 Aug, 2023, 3:28 am
@Unaone true and your right we still dont really know the main conflict besides the moon elves going after badru and caelus i definitely want the humans to play a part in this story maybe they go their after they meet nekkos oc to hide? maybe humans hate elves for "keeping magic to themselves" or something
06 Aug, 2023, 3:40 am
Maybe there's a human that's a cult leader or a CEO or something that made a device to steal the elves' magic for the humans?
And you're giving me concept art ideas lol
I'll make a quick little one I need in-between doodles when I work on illustrations
06 Aug, 2023, 3:41 am
*made or is working on
06 Aug, 2023, 3:49 am
@Unaone oh lol!! that sounds like a good villain