closer up? by AIive

idk it looks odd

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
03 Apr, 2022, 3:17 pm
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emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 3:23 pm

i dont think so

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 3:24 pm

the ears look a bit small tho

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 3:28 pm

also get the game super animal royale idk if its on 3ds but if it is we can play together, its free btw

AIive

03 Apr, 2022, 3:30 pm

@froggywoggy oki i will check it out!

-Heart4_Minji-

03 Apr, 2022, 3:46 pm

Good job! \(°・°)>

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 4:30 pm

yayyy!!!

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 4:42 pm

is it on 3ds?

AIive

03 Apr, 2022, 5:02 pm

@froggywoggy its not on it?

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 5:03 pm

what bout fortnite?

AIive

03 Apr, 2022, 5:09 pm

@froggywoggy nope not that either

zoni_lilly

03 Apr, 2022, 5:20 pm

this is pretty good !! i think there are three things we need to work on witch is

1 proportions on the face are a little out of wack with the eyes being to close together and as froggy said ears being to small and i think weirdly shaped to correct this i recommend looking up cartoon reference and trace it on a piece of paper then break it down and draw this at least five times the try on ds i think !!

zoni_lilly

03 Apr, 2022, 5:24 pm

two your times a little slow try to find the core things you need to do and crete a pattern in your layers like
1 sketch
2 lineart
3 skin
4clothes
5hair

zoni_lilly

03 Apr, 2022, 5:28 pm

3 linart the lineart it bland and and needs better consistentcy (spelled horriblely wrong lol ) like thicker lines were theres darker shadows and thin were highlights !! i think thats al

zoni_lilly

03 Apr, 2022, 5:33 pm

ur shading looks realy good though great job !!!!!!

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 5:35 pm

ugh that suscks :(

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 5:39 pm

I'm glad ya like it! And no worries bout the tag. Nothing to be sorry about m8 :p

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 5:57 pm

@zoni_lilly tho I feel lineart is a part of an artists style. Line variation may be what some do but not others. What he's got rn isn't bad at all for his art. I think first one should try doin steadier lines tho ofc have fun with experimenting with the lineart in ones own time. I like my phat lines but also love smooth ones as well. Personal preference imo tho..
(side note: stylized ears for the win all i do are large ovals with a line XD No discredit to anything you said I'm just givin my own thoughts pologies if I've possibly upset ya..)
@Resqwned I believe you feel that way cuz the anatomy is wonky but its still good. Could use face refs from anime, cartoons, photos, etc to understand whats wonky and practice towards gettin better if the wonky bothers ya. Also note for hands as I saw ya try to add one is that they are bout the size of half of a face =w= As ya grow and keep drawing you'll come to a better understanding of the stuffs ya draw and work it into your style ez pz hahah i did not mean to make this so wordy but I wanted to comment on these 'v'
Just like to talk to yall younguns

AIive

03 Apr, 2022, 6:44 pm

@the_chaos_inside thanks for the long paragraph LLLL also yeah i guess ill try to find like a ref?

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 6:44 pm

how do ppl have time to type out that long omd

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 8:25 pm

@Resqwned Possibly tutorials on how to guage the face featers and stuff. Thats a good start if you want to work on improving face layouts ;)
@Froggywoggy the art of replying on a laptop and I type fast ahaha

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 8:31 pm

oh u have a laptop thats why @The_Chaos_Inside

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 8:40 pm

@Froggywoggy it is much better replying through the laptop then ds

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 8:42 pm

yh but w the pc version u,cant see notifs, only comments on ur posts @The_Chaos_Inside

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 8:51 pm

@Froggywoggy thats why I've got both open XD

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 8:55 pm

ahhhh smart @The_Chaos_Inside

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 8:55 pm

i like the way u think @The_Chaos_Inside

The_Chaos_Inside

03 Apr, 2022, 9:05 pm

@Froggywoggy big brain moment XD hahaha

emluvzu

03 Apr, 2022, 9:24 pm

yes u have a very big brain lmao @The_Chaos_Inside

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