I love it! Great job, @Cleric!

Awesome! Your art is improving so fast, you're getting really good at anatomy!
Btw, I saw your eye technique in the playback, and I think it might help if you map the face first in the sketching phase before outlining. (Make the mapping bigger too btw, so it covers the face and not a small part of it)

Start with the shape of the head, then start mapping with 3 lines --

first one being where the eyebrows are
the second being where the end of the nose will be
and the third being the chin.
After doing that, don't be afraid to erase the top of the head and stretch it out IF YOU HAVE TO, to make a forehead. That's something I haven't noticed in personally in my art until now. It makes things look wonky sometimes, so I'm just letting you know incase it helps.

@Meowstar Thanks, I actually did have trouble with this in that exact area; the other artists wanted her OC eyeless, but drew her with eyes. So, I had to ...well, you see, just to kinda get anything kinda right... It was so tedious, you're right: I probably should've made her more forehead (Or make this closer up) for more room..

@MacWolfrie Thanks! This was, but tedious to do!