May or may not do a follow up pannel or a few
anyway i demand your critisism
i want to know if you know whats going on/understand the pannel order
#HappySquadOcs #FOcBoxcutter #FOcForoch #ThisComic
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Comments
29 Apr, 2021, 1:18 am
panel order good i found it funny did some hahas what will happen to foroch
29 Apr, 2021, 7:28 pm
ok why was my comment pretty much exactly copied
29 Apr, 2021, 8:37 pm
@ender1872
ikr????
30 Apr, 2021, 2:45 am
I completely understand it from how the dailogue goes; though I was slighty confused at the paneling at first..
The style's Awesome! Can't get over it; can't explain it correctly but, this--the feels from this, is sometimes what I try going for when doing lineart pictures!
30 Apr, 2021, 4:12 pm
@Cleric
Thanks!
Also, maybe I should put some numbers on each pannel next time.
And I guess the linart is like...messy? or choppy or something?
01 May, 2021, 2:49 am
Yes, it's messy; but in a good way!
(I think I'm super "artsy", so I'm unsure if this helps...)
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The choppy look, fits the creepy scene of Foroch eating cheese with a FREAKING void inside! It's surprising and possibly dangerous/foreboding thing, so it--the lineart; matches.
01 May, 2021, 4:27 am
i wonder what the void tastes like
01 May, 2021, 7:36 pm
borderline #dull
31 May, 2021, 10:32 am
Omg I first didn't understand it until it and which it crack my butt off so bad. XD I like this one a lot.