low effort comic #1 or something by SoupiBuddi

May or may not do a follow up pannel or a few

anyway i demand your critisism

i want to know if you know whats going on/understand the pannel order

#HappySquadOcs #FOcBoxcutter #FOcForoch #ThisComic

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painted on a Nintendo 3DS
28 Apr, 2021, 11:11 pm
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weoeoeo

29 Apr, 2021, 1:18 am

panel order good i found it funny did some hahas what will happen to foroch

weoeoeo

29 Apr, 2021, 7:28 pm

ok why was my comment pretty much exactly copied

SoupiBuddi

29 Apr, 2021, 8:37 pm

@ender1872
ikr????

Cleric

30 Apr, 2021, 2:45 am

I completely understand it from how the dailogue goes; though I was slighty confused at the paneling at first..
The style's Awesome! Can't get over it; can't explain it correctly but, this--the feels from this, is sometimes what I try going for when doing lineart pictures!

SoupiBuddi

30 Apr, 2021, 4:12 pm

@Cleric

Thanks!
Also, maybe I should put some numbers on each pannel next time.
And I guess the linart is like...messy? or choppy or something?

Cleric

01 May, 2021, 2:49 am

Yes, it's messy; but in a good way!
(I think I'm super "artsy", so I'm unsure if this helps...)
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The choppy look, fits the creepy scene of Foroch eating cheese with a FREAKING void inside! It's surprising and possibly dangerous/foreboding thing, so it--the lineart; matches.

Cibrif

01 May, 2021, 4:27 am

i wonder what the void tastes like

LunaticBiscuit

01 May, 2021, 7:36 pm

borderline #dull

Dazzleowo

31 May, 2021, 10:32 am

Omg I first didn't understand it until it and which it crack my butt off so bad. XD I like this one a lot.

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