Infinite Hallway by 0Pama0
PAGE 2
Panels LEFT to RIGHT:
Dialouge:
1. Juroun: Tylia...?
2-3 Ahhhhh!...
Characters:
Tylia K. Lewis-Murdock #TillyL
Juroun "Juro" Stines #JuroS
And no, Tylia's design hasn't changed, this is early on in the teenage years where her mother forced her to flatten her hair. Also she was gothic (sort of) and into a dark style colorwise
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13 Dec, 2020, 7:45 pm
Scary! What kinda place is this!?
14 Dec, 2020, 8:37 am
@cleric
An endless hallway which houses monsters, entities of all kind (good, bad, cruel, kind) that drive you insane with fear the longer you stay there OuO.
Haha, I've been watching too many scp videos...
[if you're curious, watch "the staircase" Scp. If you're easily scared, watch Scp Explained's version on youtube. Not that scary and leaves out details. (Scp explained is made by the same people that make the same YT channel, The Infographics Show.)]
This is J and T's first mission. I wanted to pan out the webcomic on colors before making it.
14 Dec, 2020, 1:26 pm
That's a great idea: I simply wrote a script, but ended up not using SO MUCH of the stuff I wrote.. which ended up making it mostly a waste of time.
But this way's better: if you don't like the angles, need to edit dailogue ect, it's SO much easier to have a "raw" version and a "cleaned up" one!
14 Dec, 2020, 1:31 pm
Also I hope SCP doesn't give me more weird dreams, lol!!
14 Dec, 2020, 7:50 pm
@cleric I can't promise you won't have any weird dreams from SCP
Also, sketching the comic out does make it easier to see what the final product could POSSIBLY be. However, I would suggest doing this kind of sketch when you're 80% confident and fine with what you have written down so far.
I say this because if you write down something without editing the script, you're essentially mapping out (making a sketch like this) of an unrevivsed product regarding the writing of the story.
If you're just sketching our your comic to see interesting angles for scenes, and not too worried about dialogue at the moment (or at all! Some comics don't have any words and forty panels per 2 pages!) Then go on ahead.
15 Dec, 2020, 3:30 pm
Thanks for the advice, maybe the next comic will turn out better/won't be discriminated against. #UBERNATURA was done in a stream of parodic references and action, and solely edited to be funnier and/or clearer and it STILL didn't catch on... lol!
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Also I'm still periodically having REALLY messed up dreams, so I'll wait until my head's not as crazy, before I watch anything scary.. (It's almost getting to the wake up screaming point, like on TV..)