i dont think it's the portions[arm could be a little buffer at the top tho?], i think it may be the position.
in my eyes, that position looks uncomfortable, unatural. i almost wonder if turn the body 3mm to the right might help, or turn the head 3mm to the left.

but your style might struggle w/ that idk lol. looks good though!

@Free_Frying_ I do agree with you, honestly I do need more practice on my poses and perspective. I also didn't use a reference for the pose which I should have. Thanks for the critique though. (Why do you seem like an expert on everything XD)

lmao i'm no expert, just a crazy individual who knows stuff. i also love to help people lol

if you'd like a recommendation for posing practice, go to utube, search for 'models to draw' or something like that and work within the time limit. that's how i learnt :v

@Free_Frying_ Thank you for the advice. uwu

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I actually did use a reference! I had a picture on my phone from the instagram account artadvicee and I pretty much just kept looking back at it. :-) Always try to use references for dynamic poses because it can be so difficult to nail the anatomy. :-)

Nice style